Currently failing English miserably.
My opinion will definitely be different from others, but from what I've seen so far...this is by far one of THE best dammachi fics I've read on this site so far. Even if it has 7 chapters so far. The world background is a bit slow, not overly so, but that is understandable since the story has only just begun. However, that could also mean the story won't end up short, which is definitely a plus in my book. (4.3/5 stars.) Updating stability is pretty solid. A decent 4-5 chapters is released per week, from what I've seen so far, and imo that's pretty neat. (4.5/5 stars.) Character Design. Now this is by far one of my favourites in this fanfic. The characters so far, Bell, Hestia, Freya - and the spirit, feel so fleshed out. Their reasons, and actions for the way they've been acting is delved deeper on. It is mostly in 3rd person perspective, but when it changes to 1st person, oh man, all I can say is the man has a knack for writing emotionally. Especially the chapter 'Interlude: Hestia'. You should definitely read it from the beginning to feel the build up, and emotions Hestia feels due to guilt from hiding the skills from Bell. (5/5 stars!) Story development, so far its been a great ride. First 2 chapters were a bit similar to the original, but the writer had said he wanted the story to be for those who have never read or watched danmachi so that's justifiable. After chapter 2, things really start to go down. Bell gets stronger, and is not as naive anymore. He gets guidance, and really starts to act somewhat like a 'hero'. However, its only been 7 chapters so I can't really be to sure about the story development but currently its a solid 4 in my opinion. Until more chapters get released. (4.3/5 stars.) Finally, writing quality. In my opinion, it's definitely better than most in this site. Grammar could be mildly improved, but the flow, feel and impact of the story hits like a truck. Therefore, all I can say is that its 5 stars! (5/5 stars.) This is all my opinion, so don't get your hopes up too high. All I can say is that I'm looking forward to what the story has in the future, and how it will develop. Please keep up the great work, Author!
sorry guys unexpected things cropped up and a relative of mine has unfortunately passed away earlier today :( ill try and post chapters when I have some free time really sorry about this
I've played Genshin since the first time it came out and grinded to AR 27-30 before taking a break and re-starting my whole account. Right now I'm on AR 19 on my new account
Pulled 5 star Ereshkigal on my 2nd 11 pulls🚬
fr bro picked up a sword for the first time and beat an experienced sword master with ease
remember when I gave you my pen
reminds me of Shang-Chi now
MTL is a shortened version of machine translation I think
Top Tier Providence, Secretly Cultivate for a Thousand Years
doesn't this mean that Naruto can't learn rasengan, rasenshuriken, massive rasengan etc because he doesn't have wind affinity?
I haven't gotten a single 5 star to this day...to this day😔
he turned ginger
why did you have to stop it on a cliffhanger💔
oh my great heavens...
it's been so long since I seen a second coming of gluttony fanfic here, I think I might cry 😭 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
nah this dude a professional at this shi