Review Detail of Snoring_Panda in Eternal Cultivation of Alchemy
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Hello, Author here. I decided to write this novel because of my love for alchemy in cultivation novels. while there will be every cultivation-related plot point going on in the series, it will mostly focus on Alchemy. I tried to make the MC clueless about cultivation at first, and that came off as being dumb initially. however, that changes within the first 10 chapters. Please do give it a read, especially if you like Alchemy as I do.
Eternal Cultivation of Alchemy
Snoring_Panda
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dude I've read till chapter 165 the mc is dumb as bricks and extremely naive as well. For example when he easily blurts out everything 12 masters he doesn't talk about yang body or the fact that eating beast cores above organ tempering causes beast to come and fight. Another thing is that you said he used play games but he doesn't even check the game forums for some reason. Anyway but I wanted to know if the story because 200 chapters or not.
I don't think so. but it's still too early into the series to tell that. I might change it depending on where I go with the story.
Ahiraf_Mirak:Is this a harem?
Even if you did, remember to write a actual character rather than just another doll for the mc to 'gotta catch them all' like collection there without their own goal and personality. I recommend check this video '10 BEST TIPS FOR WRITING WOMEN' (fun fact: even some female author struggle to write good female character due to the media stereotype about woman for their whole life)
Snoring_Panda:I don't think so. but it's still too early into the series to tell that. I might change it depending on where I go with the story.
ArashiTenebris:Even if you did, remember to write a actual character rather than just another doll for the mc to 'gotta catch them all' like collection there without their own goal and personality. I recommend check this video '10 BEST TIPS FOR WRITING WOMEN' (fun fact: even some female author struggle to write good female character due to the media stereotype about woman for their whole life)
Snoring_Panda:People can't cultivate out of the game, if that's what you are worried about.
Snoring_Panda:I don't think so. but it's still too early into the series to tell that. I might change it depending on where I go with the story.
Snoring_Panda:I don't think so. but it's still too early into the series to tell that. I might change it depending on where I go with the story.
ArashiTenebris:Even if you did, remember to write a actual character rather than just another doll for the mc to 'gotta catch them all' like collection there without their own goal and personality. I recommend check this video '10 BEST TIPS FOR WRITING WOMEN' (fun fact: even some female author struggle to write good female character due to the media stereotype about woman for their whole life)
Snoring_Panda:People can't cultivate out of the game, if that's what you are worried about.
honestly no idea. I am swamped with writing 5 chaps a day with the other 2 books. once I get a hang of the load and can write more, I will continue it. Didn't want it to go through an early phase of neglect like energy did.
_Tea_Lover_:Hey, off topic, but when's the next episode of ultimate monster evolution?
