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Bro he literally made his way to the top by marrying his boss’s daughter, what a mad lad.
This review I wanna declare my departure, I just read 10 chaps and I am rather shameless for making a review based on that, but I have a logical reason for that. First is the grammar, it’s like reading MTL, and you expect me to read it by using so much brain power? no thanks, though it is readable compared to MTL, but still I don’t wanna read it cause it irritates me for breaking my immersion towards the story, like nobody would speak such grammatical error, even it is, it’s very unnatural. Second, Lock chapters, considering the quality of the grammar, I would not waste my free pass. There are many novels books that are much worth compared to this and would rather spend them on it than this. Third, too much to read, I have many book and novels in my reading list and would rather read this if I don’t have any much of a choice. In conclusion, I don’t wanna read it unless author fixed the grammars. But I would like to say that this novel has so much potential, although the title is rather misleading! it says cheat internet connection but its just mc having an OP phone like other OG isekai smartphones novels, but this smartphone literally an abyss that eats money to use an app! Also, there’s also the issue where mc just producing products out of nowhere, and the city would not be dumb to not investigate such stuff, a man suddenly pops up and yet producing from who knows where the products came from and earned so much money? well that’s my take for this, the story has no issue asside from what I commented on, and would recommend if you waste your brain and time for this novel.
I think being a fanboy is good, such innocence and naive mindset somehow motivates towards their goals. Being cynical and realistic would drain you from energy, thinking that you have enough from the world. Me, although I fanboy some figures, it dissipates eventually in moments for I have a pessimistic and realistic perspective in life that I rationalize everything in my surrounding and in my mind. It’s good, but I don’t really have much energy to pursue whatever my goals are, perhaps if I have a convenient environment I could capitalize my strengths but I digress. But hey, it’s good overall, you don’t need to force someone, can you convince a muslim to eat pork? no, just giving your opinion is enough and let them be.
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Omg, he would go bald at this rate
All criteria of this novel is passable, I enjoyed it until the latest chap (63) and its really good and well paced. The only thing I cringe is the head patting, who does that seriously? if you want to advance with a girl please spare the head patting, don’t tell me you’re gonna head pat all the love interest in mc’s way?! that’s crazy! goes to show author does not have any skills in getting women 😤 There are some parts of this that are quite unique compared to other fanfics, the main characters of marvels are well-written, I like the process of his leveling his power similar to Iron Man making his suit and it is very satisfying. Also the fighting scenes is really good, goes to show author researched realy well when it comes to action, but you should make Peter badass when it comes to fighting, his rather powerful in your novel compared to others and his fights are quite lackluster, perhaps due to his other abilities? his quite reliant on it compared to the OG spidey where he fights really epic like levi from AOT. Everything looks logical so far, even though I suspect that your reason where mc not reliant on movie knowledge bcuz it’s a movie while in the situation it became real to make mc intervene and become a star where the whole revolve around him. Please I don’t want Tony Stark go simping on his knowledge, please give others some depth and not over inflate mc cause too much of it is a turnoff and just stick to the original while not sticking to it regidly, similar like how you include Lady D, it was quite a unique experience and I want more unique twist from you novel while staying true to the original set-up of other characters. I hope for this novel to reach 100+ chaps, I really enjoyed this fanfic overall and want more!
True, the author should know how to write the inner monologue that is right for individual characters to give depth and dynamic atmosphere. Kinda like eating, I like chicken and could eat them breakfast and lunch but I would get sick of it if I eat it on dinner, and would probably eat something aside from that. Having diverse personality in a novel gives us a sense of fullness and surprises, giving us fresh perspectives and immersed on the character more deeply.
I see, so in truth, mc could totally inherit OFA without the negative side effects since the quirk of this Tristy can identify who has Quirks by hands-on experience, so if Aizawa punches Tristy it would reflect back. Well, I think we are already passed the bridge of mc getting OFA, it’s just me venting my own feelings.
Are you going for that?
ayy isn’t that a good quirk?
it’s anime, it’s all about hair.
True, most mc who are grateful to their enemy is mostly by inserting a sword in their hearts as a gratitude🫶
reminds of Ben 10