Review Detail of DaoistuTcOyd in Marvel: Tech System

All criteria of this novel is passable, I enjoyed it until the latest chap (63) and its really good and well paced. The only thing I cringe is the head patting, who does that seriously? if you want to advance with a girl please spare the head patting, don’t tell me you’re gonna head pat all the love interest in mc’s way?! that’s crazy! goes to show author does not have any skills in getting women 😤 There are some parts of this that are quite unique compared to other fanfics, the main characters of marvels are well-written, I like the process of his leveling his power similar to Iron Man making his suit and it is very satisfying. Also the fighting scenes is really good, goes to show author researched realy well when it comes to action, but you should make Peter badass when it comes to fighting, his rather powerful in your novel compared to others and his fights are quite lackluster, perhaps due to his other abilities? his quite reliant on it compared to the OG spidey where he fights really epic like levi from AOT. Everything looks logical so far, even though I suspect that your reason where mc not reliant on movie knowledge bcuz it’s a movie while in the situation it became real to make mc intervene and become a star where the whole revolve around him. Please I don’t want Tony Stark go simping on his knowledge, please give others some depth and not over inflate mc cause too much of it is a turnoff and just stick to the original while not sticking to it regidly, similar like how you include Lady D, it was quite a unique experience and I want more unique twist from you novel while staying true to the original set-up of other characters. I hope for this novel to reach 100+ chaps, I really enjoyed this fanfic overall and want more!