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Philip_Ball_25677dCommentedCh 47 Secret hunt- Philip_Ball_25677dCommented
streak... yes. . steak... no..
"You should complete your tasks as soon as possible instead of playing with these clowns." A steak of sword light appeared in the dark sky and the figure of a handsome Swordsman became clear — It was the strongest swordsman under Jun. - Philip_Ball_25678dCommented
them works better than they
Everyone had now considered those the planes of immortals... untouchable by mortals such as they. - Philip_Ball_256710dCommented
brake .. is to slow down.. break.... is to be damaged..
"Your fiancé got his sword broken while fighting? Is he alright?" Alex asked, surprised because he knew when someone's sword brake fighting, their chances of survival were very thin. - Philip_Ball_256710dCommented
hale is spelled hail. when referring to ice
(Minor Hale Storm)- Cover the area in a small Hale Strom. - Philip_Ball_256710dCommented
looking. ..yes.. locking... no..
Alex reached the first one of four mini-bosses; it was a snow wolf standing 7ft tall, locking nothing like an Elite version of his species. - Philip_Ball_256710dCommented
wolves is plural not wolfs
"You guys can kill wolfs if you want to, but I will not be going with you," Alex replied to Badger, not even considering the offer of fighting with them and making less progress than he can do alone. - Philip_Ball_256711dCommented
This is a great read. Characters well formed with their own views on their world and family. Thank you for writing with enough passion to stir rainbows from my eyes to run down my cheeks. Real feelings and respect accordingly in this story. This is definitely equal with the best here and anywhere else too. Well done thank you for your creation here.
Ch 40 Hammer For All Seasons [Part 2] - Philip_Ball_256715dCommented
they were. ...not good enough.. that were.... yes
These sheets were frayed at the edges and had yellowed with age, and they provided detailed information about the two items they were placed beside. - Philip_Ball_256715dCommented
was. ..no.. was.. . yes
"You see that as disgraceful? Bitch, you're crazy! All I see is blinding manliness bursting forth!" another onlooker retorted, clearly impressed by Valerius's resolve. He didn't care who he waa offending because he had quite a solid backing himself. - Philip_Ball_256715dCommented
quiten....no. . quieten.... yes
"Quiten down!" - Philip_Ball_256717dCommented
of.... what is this?
This paragraph has been deleted. - Philip_Ball_256717dCommented
boyswed time? OK what did you really mean to be here?
This paragraph has been deleted. - Philip_Ball_256717dCommentedCh 15 Chapter 15: Neo-Nephilim