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This fanfic blew me away! It's hands down one of the best I've ever read on this site. Young Kenshin's interactions had me cracking up non-stop during the first two arcs. All in all, it's just an amazing story. Mad props to the author - you killed it! Can't wait to see what you've got in store for arc three. Bring it on!
So, I went into this Tonikaku Kawaii fanfic totally blind, with no clue about the anime. Zero expectations. I've only read the first 20 chapters, but here's the deal: the premise felt pretty cliche, and honestly, it was a bit of a letdown. Kinda reminds me of a typical Chinese fanfic. The interactions between the main guy and girl made me cringe a bit - feels like it was written by a teenage girl, lol. The chat group system was a nice touch, but there hasn't been much focus on that in these early chapters. Plus, the main character is already super OP from the get-go, so I'm not sure where the story's headed. Look, it's not really my thing, but hey, props to the author for putting their first fanfic out there on this platform. Best of luck to 'em!
Haha đ ! Just spotted your growing Patreon subscriber base - congrats, you totally deserve it! Keep up the amazing work. đ
Totally cool with you having a Patreon, but just wondering, does your dad know what the MC pulled on his own dad? đđ
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I honestly feel like I might not be getting the full genius of this story. It began on a high note but quickly became a bit messy, unpolished, and repetitive, just like another review mentioned. Even after 20 chapters, I'm struggling to catch on to the main hook or setup of the plot; it seems a bit scattered to me.
Hey, your story's got something cool going on! But, it feels like there's too much fluff that stretches things out more than needed. It's a bit like the writing's not all coming from you, kinda artificial, maybe? It messes with getting really into the story.
Pretty good read! The MC can be a bit annoying sometimes because he's a bit inconsistent and doesn't seem to learn from his mistakes, but it's still one of the better fanfics here. Just don't expect too much and enjoy it for what it is. Also, about Grafyia's situation, felt like she got off too easy. I'm not trying to be dark, but the MC's idea of revenge definitely doesn't match mine. Still, worth a read!
I feel you, man. But to be honest, I'm not really disgusted because of how Grayfia and Sirzechs treated the MC. I wouldn't go as far as to say it was deserved, but I can see where he's coming from on this one.