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DaoistCnPyXT

DaoistCnPyXT

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2023-09-06 JoinedGlobal
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  • DaoistCnPyXT
    DaoistCnPyXT30d
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    I wish she would relax sometimes. If something happened they would tell her immediately

    "Those injured were treated by the sorcerer. The commander is, of course, unscathed," Ursuline replied flatly. He pointed a thumb at the basilica. "Your ladyship will find him in there."
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    Under the Oak Tree
    Fantasy · Suji Kim
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  • DaoistCnPyXT
    DaoistCnPyXT1mth
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    she mentioned before that magic can’t heal brain damage unfortunately when one of the anatolian knights had a horrible eye injury

    She positioned herself beside a soldier whose injuries looked most critical. Taking hold of the man's heavily dented helmet, she pried it off, revealing a swollen temporal region that resembled a pufferfish. She swallowed back a defeated sigh; the damage to his skull had led to a buildup of blood within his head. Magic offered little aid in cases like these. She called out for a cleric and moved on to the next patient.
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    Under the Oak Tree
    Fantasy · Suji Kim
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  • DaoistCnPyXT
    DaoistCnPyXT1mth
    Commented

    it would be nice since the land the duchy is on once belonged to her maternal ancestors

    "Regardless of the state of your relationship, you are the duke's firstborn," Sir Derek replied calmly. "Although His Grace has declared the crown princess's second child his heir, his condition might not hold until then. If he were to pass without a designated heir, as the eldest, you would likely inherit all."
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    Under the Oak Tree
    Fantasy · Suji Kim
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  • DaoistCnPyXT
    DaoistCnPyXT3mth
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    wow. she didn’t think of how being married to someone as dangerous as Luciano will be because of her job. She travels for her food critiques and I have a feeling that she’s going to have a lot of restrictions (target for his enemies) in place once it becomes known who’s wife she is smh. I feel like realistically, given her personality, she should be a lot more hesitant maybe a little more pragmatic.

    Luciano asked me to marry him. That really happened. And he was serious. 
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    CEO of Seduction
    Urban · emme_z
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  • DaoistCnPyXT
    DaoistCnPyXT3mth
    Commented

    *Fiancée

    "Okay," he repeats, wiping my tears, tracing my lips, kissing me. "Lorelei Gray," he says between brief, passionate kisses. "My fiancé." 
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    CEO of Seduction
    Urban · emme_z
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  • DaoistCnPyXT
    DaoistCnPyXT4mth
    Commented

    she needs to chill out

    "Do you really think I can't be left alone for a few minutes, Raya?" She asks dryly. 
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    CEO of Seduction
    Urban · emme_z
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  • DaoistCnPyXT
    DaoistCnPyXT4mth
    Posted

    This seems to be an issue across WebNovel- the lack of grammar quality and sentence fluidity. I appreciate that many WN authors are probably not native speakers of english, and it’s a stupidly difficult language to master especially when it comes to writing/literature, but it’s hard for me to to justify spending coins that I paid for on awkwardly written web novels. I suggest perhaps asking a native speaker to proofread and edit your stories before you post. It’s not just the grammar, but certain phrases that just don’t make sense, and there’s 800+ chapters of this that I’m supposed to pay for? I think not.

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    The Crown's Obsession
    Fantasy · ash_knight17
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  • DaoistCnPyXT
    DaoistCnPyXT4mth
    Commented

    We Bare Werebears

    Most staff working in this place were shifters. Werewolves, weretigers, werebears, and werelions.
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    The Lycan's Sin
    Fantasy · B_Mitchylle
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  • DaoistCnPyXT
    DaoistCnPyXT4mth
    Replied to Tara_Marie_3216

    is it really selfish though? marylis manipulated her into this. Broody accused her of hurting amelia now wants her help???? after everything he did as well? i think she just said pay me to get them off her back

    "Then send the money to my account," Ava said. "I can't help you. But… you can always hire me."
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    The Lycan's Sin
    Fantasy · B_Mitchylle
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  • DaoistCnPyXT
    DaoistCnPyXT4mth
    Commented

    half blood?!?! where was that even mentioned?

    For years, his family had served Matthew's and had been trained to protect them. At first, Munoz hated the half-bloods. He didn't want to work for him. But when he knew that Matthew was going to become the next king, he left his home and followed him.
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    The Lycan's Sin
    Fantasy · B_Mitchylle
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  • DaoistCnPyXT
    DaoistCnPyXT4mth
    Commented

    A royal. He’s a royal. or He IS royalty. If you need someone to proofread any future books hmu PLEASE

    "A royalty?" she asked, surprised.
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    The Lycan's Sin
    Fantasy · B_Mitchylle
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  • DaoistCnPyXT
    DaoistCnPyXT4mth
    Commented

    …people use that word all the time….

    Is that even a word? If not, she just made it one.
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    The Lycan's Sin
    Fantasy · B_Mitchylle
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  • DaoistCnPyXT
    DaoistCnPyXT4mth
    Replied to Ashbooks3639

    No, it was Patthew.

    "The first witch's name… Not many people knew it but…The name's Eva."
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    The Lycan's Sin
    Fantasy · B_Mitchylle
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  • DaoistCnPyXT
    DaoistCnPyXT4mth
    Posted

    The writing seems very stiff and awkward in some parts. Not Worth spending coin until that is rectified. I tried to get past it but it breaks the fantasy for me.

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    The Lycan's Sin
    Fantasy · B_Mitchylle
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  • DaoistCnPyXT
    DaoistCnPyXT4mth
    Commented

    Exactly. What a standup guy

    "She must have forgotten about it. And why would you even ask her to do that when she was already thirty-nine weeks pregnant?"
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    The Lycan's Sin
    Fantasy · B_Mitchylle
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  • DaoistCnPyXT
    DaoistCnPyXT4mth
    Commented

    “I didn’t come here for one” would make more sense if Ava said “I’m not offering you >a cup of< tea

    "I didn't come here for one."
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    The Lycan's Sin
    Fantasy · B_Mitchylle
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  • DaoistCnPyXT
    DaoistCnPyXT4mth
    Commented

    Who has*

    Of course, Lycans can have human mates. However, Lycans cannot mate with some who have magick coursing through their veins. It was just biologically impossible to have that bond with someone that could channel abilities from nature.
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    The Lycan's Sin
    Fantasy · B_Mitchylle
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  • DaoistCnPyXT
    DaoistCnPyXT4mth
    Replied to sem20str

    no, it’s thefact that they’r allegedly e breeding with family that’s the issue. inbreeding causes a lot of issues. well that’s avas theory anyway

    Everyone knows that the reason why the Lycan numbers are slowly decreasing is that some of them cannot transform themselves into a Lycan form. While Ava didn't know the specific reason, she had her suspicions that this was because of inbreeding.
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    The Lycan's Sin
    Fantasy · B_Mitchylle
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  • DaoistCnPyXT
    DaoistCnPyXT4mth
    Commented

    so then, why not just do the spells the traditional way…?

    But the thing is… the spell would take a toll on her brain. Nosebleeds and headaches were just part of the aftermath. The fact that she couldn't control the size of the spell is another thing.
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    The Lycan's Sin
    Fantasy · B_Mitchylle
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  • DaoistCnPyXT
    DaoistCnPyXT4mth
    Commented

    Inconsistency here. She just insinuated involving her human son-in-law in this a few paragraphs ago to whoch Ava responded with ‘this is witch business, not his business’

    "Showing magic… in front of a human!?" Patricia uttered in horror as she lowered her hand. "How could you do that!"
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    The Lycan's Sin
    Fantasy · B_Mitchylle
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