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ash_waa_01211dCommentedthat came Outta nowhere
There was a burning desire inside me to become the strongest in this world of fantasy where magic existed, but Adrian Vaiself was a literal garbage character with no talent in anything.- ash_waa_01211dReplied to ash_waa_012
man what a mess has he made...
'He remembered!' she thought …' I thought he didn't even pay attention to what I said that day ….' - ash_waa_01211dReplied to Yonaas
hey random stranger, i apologise if my little brother might have said something rude or disrespectful to you, I came in seeing him playing with my account, do pls forgive him if he did something rude.
'He remembered!' she thought …' I thought he didn't even pay attention to what I said that day ….' - ash_waa_01211dReplied to Yonaas
spoil it for me I'm all for it!
Sylvan swiftly swept Eva off her feet and pressed her back against one of the trees, using its cover to shield them from prying eyes. - ash_waa_01211dReplied to Yonaas
so how did she even discover it? that she loves him and not others?
'He remembered!' she thought …' I thought he didn't even pay attention to what I said that day ….' - ash_waa_01211dReplied to Yonaas
not that, I was talking about how this sentence was sounding ,I think you should adjust it so that it is clear that she blushed only because he was the one that said it. also why is this an intimate word?
Her cheeks flushed the moment he brought the harem subject. - ash_waa_01211dReplied to Yonaas
that's exactly why she shouldn't have said those words,to save his life.
"T-t-this man," Eva stammered, her voice trembling with emotion, "saved me from... the council. This man is the person I-I-I... I love, Xylon." - ash_waa_01211dCommented
also what was this about? i remember reading this and just skimming through it cause it frustrated me ?
'He remembered!' she thought …' I thought he didn't even pay attention to what I said that day ….' - ash_waa_01211dCommented
why this rxn? this makes it look like she blushed when mc mentioned that x was attempting to add her in his harem? she looks excited
Her cheeks flushed the moment he brought the harem subject. - ash_waa_01211dReplied to
yeah you say that and then in the latest chs ut happens again.
Sylvan swiftly swept Eva off her feet and pressed her back against one of the trees, using its cover to shield them from prying eyes. - ash_waa_01211dReplied to Yonaas
what she said was impulsive and that's why I came from her heart...i don't think she is stupid enough to say that she loves someone in front of mc
"T-t-this man," Eva stammered, her voice trembling with emotion, "saved me from... the council. This man is the person I-I-I... I love, Xylon." - ash_waa_01211dCommented
what about this then? she literally says she loves x..
"T-t-this man," Eva stammered, her voice trembling with emotion, "saved me from... the council. This man is the person I-I-I... I love, Xylon." - ash_waa_01211dCommented
when are actions like this going to stop?
Sylvan swiftly swept Eva off her feet and pressed her back against one of the trees, using its cover to shield them from prying eyes. - ash_waa_01211dCommented
that's what I mentioned when i said she wants to run away from him
"I... I can't do this," she choked out between sobs, her voice trembling with fear and uncertainty. "I would never be able to escape Xylon... He will always find me." - ash_waa_01211dCommented
here she is not even saying that she even likes the mc...
After a while, Eva walked through the silent forest, her steps were heavy with the weight of her own insecurities. - ash_waa_01211dCommented
this, these are actions that I hate, when she does nothing when other man than mc touches her, where is her trauma?
Sylvan swiftly swept Eva off her feet and pressed her back against one of the trees, using its cover to shield them from prying eyes. - ash_waa_01211dReplied to Yonaas
Also she likes them so much as to go against the one she supposedly "loves" and earn his hatred for the rest of her life? why is she so indecisive when choosing to stay with him and going away with them? why does she wanna run away? why does she stutter in front of him and speak warmly to these other men? why has there been no show of affection between them? why is it that she does not resist when one of the other two get close to her or wanna touch her? why is that she speaks nothing against it when x said "you were destined to be mine"? why? why is she that much comfortable with hem than the one she supposedly loves"? i dunno man .these past chapters had crunched my stomach to oblivion to the point that i have constipation now lol...... 😭
Ch 390 You manipulated them, both! - ash_waa_01211dReplied to Yonaas
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