The fact that asking for stealth was what made the god pause after essentially granting MC beyond god of shinobi traits is, uh, interesting. Let's see how this turns out

Exiling a jinchuriki? My suspension of disbelief is being pushed to the edge, but, I'm willing to see where this goes (again 😅)

One of the best teases of a good Naruto fic out there 😅 The story ultimately goes nowhere but it has a great start. Truly unique in it's approach to a tired trope that's been abused a bit here (🙈 yes I am guilty of it too), bringing a bit of fresh perspective. Really gets me thinking of what could have been.

Is the lack of tags intentional? Not looking forward to starting this then rage quitting in the middle of it

Apologies, but I just couldn't get past the grammar. I think an editing pass in grammarly would be educational for the writer/translator and massively improve readability.

If you are here for an Itachi adventure in ATG, you may be disappointed. His characterisation here is so far removed from the original, it's hard to see him as Itachi. If you are here for Yun Che with sharingaan, you may find it refreshing. I'm in the first camp so I've gone as far as I can with it.🖖🏾 Writing Quality - good. Updating Stability - apparently dropped, but seems to have been ok while it ran. Character Design - more could have been done with Itachi. Even where he would have done the same as Yun Che, the motivation would be materially different

The whole 'orphan bringing us down ' thing doesn't make sense, especially in a warrior society. Fugaku also losing his cook to the point of shedding his dignity to beat up a kid seems unlikely. Perhaps if a different, more believable source of conflict was used...

Lol, 5 years 😅

Lol, I thought it was clear when I didn't see the harem tag but by chapter 4, my Spidey sense was tingling 😂 Thanks for the heads up and thoughtful review!

This is one rework from being pretty good. I know that may change the author's intent, but as it is, it just has good bones. Writing Quality: technical issues plague it, but it is more legible than an MTL. Updating Stability: Seemed to have a good cadence until it stopped. Story Development: a little all over the place. Definitely one of the areas that would benefit from a rework. Character Design: MC is a bit reckless World background: Kishimoto does the heavy lifting here, which is understandable for a fic.

The HRUNTING/YGGDRASIL Mark I ADS from Halo Legends.

Shame it got dropped, otherwise it was nice while it lasted

I swear, if this guy goes to cash in the bounty without a henge after hearing how connected this bandit was...

Unfortunately, this reads like an MTL. It makes it difficult to follow the story or fully grasp the concept behind it. Perhaps with a serious round of editing, it can show it's true potential

Severe lack of punctuation makes this irritating to read/listen to at times. The status screens are also a peeve of mine, sometimes feeling like they're half the content. It's not for me, but I can get how that's the whole point for others. Otherwise it's an interesting idea for an au fic. The concept has legs and I can only hope it gets a rework in future. It would elevate the work so much.

What a promising start! I also appreciate that the MC doesn't seem to be one of those evil for evils sake types. Looking forward to seeing how the story develops

At least I didn't imagine this not being tagged. It's been ages but tags would have been a nice little courtesy. Oh well

So, Naruto is a hoe and all the women are cougars? Okay then 😅

Ah, forgot why I had stopped this 😂

I guess this must be a Chinese novel translation, given the tropes and randomly Chinese names. Still, as far as MTLs go, enough context makes it through for those familiar with Naruto to fill in the blanks. Some manual intervention may have been made or a better translator was used. As far as the storyline goes, it's okay. The main Idea is interesting and It leans towards the comedic side of things. It definitely depends on head canon interpretations of characters and their motivations and adds cultivation novel mechanics. If that will Agravate you, just go ahead and skip it. Otherwise, if you can dedicate a few extra brain cells to smooth out the weirdness, it's an ok read. It would be infinitely better if the translator also dedicated a little time a day to run Find and Replace on each chapter to fix the obvious translation issues.