Review Detail of MukomaTJ in Grave digging system

This is one rework from being pretty good. I know that may change the author's intent, but as it is, it just has good bones. Writing Quality: technical issues plague it, but it is more legible than an MTL. Updating Stability: Seemed to have a good cadence until it stopped. Story Development: a little all over the place. Definitely one of the areas that would benefit from a rework. Character Design: MC is a bit reckless World background: Kishimoto does the heavy lifting here, which is understandable for a fic.