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Author of Re:Servant. I began writing as a way to create a world I love. Please give me any criticism, thank you.
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There’s cases in the world where people are easy to win over when they’re given something they lack (like love). Fang is kinda like this, where he’s won over by Salika because she didn’t feel disgusted by him, but also because she gave him a new opportunity to restart.
I noticed this too in my writing but I was unsure on how to fix it. I’l definitely go back and edit with your advice.
I guess you could say the story is about Fang and overcoming his inner conflicts he sustained in the past. As of now in the beginning, he’s just trying to understand everything that’s going on. Before I began writing on webnovel I made the chapters 4k plus words, but tried to cut them as much as I can. ”Fate Bestows a White Haired Girl” and onwards are 1.5k-2.5k words thankfully. Thank you for your feed back and comments!
When I was little my parents used to make me eat medicine that taste like sh** so this is where I got the idea from lol
I hope you continue your journey with Fang in Re:Servant! I plan to have him change a lot throughout the story as events progress, so stick along to see. A lot of my inspiration comes from other works, like Re:Zero's dark plot, Jobless Reincarnation's unique characters, Hunter x Hunter's power system that seems so free, and much more. I'll try and post as many chapters as possible, but with school in the way, some chapters may take a few days to release (forgive me!).
The first chapter by itself exceeded my expectations. Something I notice with a lot of webnovels is grammar and spelling issues but you have little to none. Something that really stuck with me was the main character Reimei. Maybe it’s their condition, but something in me wants to support her all the way. Conclusion: need more [img=update]
Already banger intro
Jesus Christ 🤯
“Where hungrt was torture and thirst was a slayer” pretty fire if you ask me 😎🔥