It's interesting for sure. I just read up till Chapter 4 and I am not sure where is the story heading towards. There's a lot of mystery shrouded here and there, hidden in the story for readers to discover. The chapters were slightly bit too long but that's just my personal preference. Keep up the good work author.
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LIKEI guess you could say the story is about Fang and overcoming his inner conflicts he sustained in the past. As of now in the beginning, he’s just trying to understand everything that’s going on. Before I began writing on webnovel I made the chapters 4k plus words, but tried to cut them as much as I can. ”Fate Bestows a White Haired Girl” and onwards are 1.5k-2.5k words thankfully. Thank you for your feed back and comments!