Review Detail of fwjchim in ZuoMeng: To Dream

Item: ZuoMeng: To Dream
Rating: 4.8

Review detail

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It’s full of suspense and exciting events. Some grammar errors but almost all of the sentences read together nicely. When characters talk, some expression could be used like an exclamation point or question mark, not just a period. Overall very good!

ZuoMeng: To Dream

Sereinchoo

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Forgot to mention I’m still in the beginning so if you’ve fixed the expressions then very nice 👍

1yr

SereinchooAuthorSereinchoo

Thanks for the suggestion I will take note on that. Thanks again ヽ(^o^)ノ

1yr