Review Detail of fwjchim in EDEN LOCKER 'S MAGUS SYSTEM {I-XI} And THE BLACK CREST FAMILY

Item: EDEN LOCKER 'S MAGUS SYSTEM {I-XI} And THE BLACK CREST FAMILY
Rating: 4.8

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I really enjoyed the world building and the uniqueness of characters. There were some spelling and grammar problems but those could be fixed easily. With your talent, please continue writing!

EDEN LOCKER 'S MAGUS SYSTEM {I-XI} And THE BLACK CREST FAMILY

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Will try harder to improve. Thank you so much

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