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QuaziY7hCommentedI hope she can create something to inject in her people's (private army) body, wich will help her to keep constant track of their loyalties.
Ava instructed them to sleep. After everyone was asleep, Ava was alone in her lab, sitting and thinking about her next move. She took her equipment and started creating things, then she instructed Katie to order the things she needed for it.- QuaziY7hReplied to TrueTruth6t
she looks older than her mom
(Pic in the comment) - QuaziY21hCommented
am confused. why's Regina there? Ava hasn't stabilised that kind of bond with her to share her secrets.
Regina looked at Ava in confusion as Elena explained to her what Ava had told her about. Ava said while looking at Maya, "Grandma, did Mom tell you about it?" - QuaziY1dCommented
it'd be better if people wouldn't become young, then it would be hard to find out about the serum.
Melissa nodded and said, "Okay, I will inform them about it, but be careful, sweetie," as Melissa patted Ava's shoulder. - QuaziY1dCommented
What's the rush here? she just gotten with Elena, she should now focus on her, learn about each other and grow their bond.
Ava looked into Regina's eyes and said, "Then what's the problem? I find you physically attractive, and you enjoy my physical touch. You don't have to worry about others knowing about it; I will handle it." - QuaziY1dPosted
Translation and updating is very good. Rest of it at best is ok. Character design is poor. Character's monologue is really a mood killer. And world background, it's difficult for me to relate to it, because I don't understand Chinese and don't watch Chinese movies or dramas, so Chinese name and background looks foreign to me. it's awkward 😕. I hope to read European/Indian medical novels.
- QuaziY2dCommented
he's getting years worth of experience. what more he wants?
Chen Cang sighed. If he was going to be exploited for free, so be it. He'd been exploited for two years already; one more time wouldn't make much difference. - QuaziY2dCommented
won't he get any starter package?
Chen Cang got up early every day, had breakfast, went for a run, and then headed to his unit, and even then, he would arrive just a little after 7 AM, before the shift change. - QuaziY2dCommented
so everyone will know from now onwards how much he's getting!!
"Yes! 100 yuan, Chen, you're quite lucky!" The nurse leader also laughed. - QuaziY2dCommented
1.100 RMB meaning? 1100/1.1?
[Ding! NPC senior physician Chen Bingsheng's task: Cover his shift while Chen Bingsheng is in surgery. Task completion reward: 1. 100 RMB; 2. Chen Bingsheng's favorability +2. 3. Experience +30.] - QuaziY3dCommented
his father isn't naive. he's a shrewd politician. but he has chosen to live his life by honour.
However, despite our opposing views, my relationship with him is quite good, as unlike how I do with my father I don't harshly rebuke him. At most, we both oppose each other's views over a few words. Why should I, I don't care whether he lives or dies. I also try to show the truth to my father through my criticizing remarks because of my mother, I try to keep him alive as repayment to the woman who let my heart feel some warmth after many years. - QuaziY3dCommented
his father might remove him from heirship. for not respecting his lord and their ways of life.
Altair: I have done so as well. However, flattery corrupts both the giver and the receiver. He can at least keep himself alive longer by listening to my harsh words and looking beyond his honour. - QuaziY3dCommented
if he was not a 1 year old child, this story would be a top class fiction. It's disturbing reading about a 1 year old child maiming, killing, upgrading body parts etc. it'd be great if there was a time skip and then these events.
Mountain goats of Vale can expertly traverse impossibly steep terrain. Their body's balance and stabilizing features will be very helpful. Pondering on these he walked back to his room. - QuaziY3dCommented
these things from a year old child doesn't make sense, especially in a medieval society, they would drown/burn him thinking him devil spawn.
At this time words of what happened in the Great Hall was already being spread by rumours and gossip like wildfire. People started many nicknames from me among them one being - THE FEROCIOUS FALCON. This name which started as castle rumours would be one of the names stuck to my legend for thousands of years. - QuaziY3dCommented
common people are cannon fodder in ASOIAF world. No one is good there. maybe some lords or knights stick to their principles but that's not being good. MC's character doesn't suit that world. only by forcing events and making no sense, you can make it work.
A/N: So, was anyone surprised at who, or rather what, I picked to be 'good' in Westeros? - QuaziY3dCommented
just ask that you can easily get to the peak level of everything in your race. if you are godlike strong, then many crisis and plot etc in your novel will seem pointless.
" For my second wish I would like to have One For All. That way I could possibly turn into some type of AllMight with enough training and who knows maybe even surpass him. After all One For All is a stockpiling quirk meaning sky is the limit when it comes to its growth." - QuaziY3dCommented
why travel? better reincarnate again in another universe. it'll get boring if you're very strong and go to another universe like that.
" For my first wish, I would like a way to travel the Multiverse. Staying in the same world especially a world like Twilight will get boring at some point." I said. - QuaziY3dCommented
he just slept and born again, that's a negative point from me.
14 years have passed, well, how can I sum up what happened...? Well, I went to sleep, when suddenly I was born...?! When I was born they thought I was handicapped by not crying and the old, fucking, said "retarded boy is" she called me retarded, retarded is her and her whole fucking family! - QuaziY6dCommented
I hope characters don't turn into non human. and aren't too overpowered. instead of getting younger it would have been better if they aged slowly from their current age and gotten their peak body back.
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