it's a good chapter but you make the fight way to long at this one fight was 2 chapters long so if the next fight is as long or longer then people most will just skip it or stop reading the fic
this is one of the best pokemon fan-fics that i have found as it has great story writing and I personally like the pacing of the story and it having a good stability to the chapter releases with it also being made alongside a second fan-fic as well.