Aether_10101
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2008
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small personal criticism I unlocked the chapters up to chapter 59, and I find that the interactions between the Mc and FL are a bit emotionless. The same goes for the other characters. I don't know how to write a novel so I can't give advice but I will still make a little aside on this problem of lack of emotion, of humanity for the characters. Otherwise good job
the beginning after the end it exists in novel and in manhwa
I decided to re-upload the review after reading more chapters. good novel a tragic beginning which creates empathy for the reader, endearing characters. But also excellent update stability. But I find this novel quite childish, the first chapter shows that the mc is a bit naive. It's weird because I'm used to cool, cruel, ruthless Mcs. As said in the other comment, there is a lot to improve. Ps English is not my mother tongue so sorry for the mistakes
I like this type of novel with an immortal mc who is very old. I can't judge what the novel will be like in the future due to the low number of chapters. Since I'm not very good at writing reviews. So I'm just going to encourage the author to continue his novel which is a very good job, hoping that he won't abandon it because I think it has potential. PS: English is not my mother tongue
I'm glad I found this nugget. It is rare to find a cultivation novel where the mc does not start from scratch but from the top. I've only read vol 1 so far, but I'm already hooked on the story. I hope that the author will not abandon this story and that he will continue his excellent work. PS: I hope the story is not harem PSS: English is not my native language so sorry for the mistakes