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I just started this story and after reading the first few chapters I immediately fell in love with the story. The two main characters are endearing and the story is interesting. Good job author, I hope this story doesn't get abandoned
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small personal criticism I unlocked the chapters up to chapter 59, and I find that the interactions between the Mc and FL are a bit emotionless. The same goes for the other characters. I don't know how to write a novel so I can't give advice but I will still make a little aside on this problem of lack of emotion, of humanity for the characters. Otherwise good job
PeterPan:Nope… this is my dream project of couple romance
PeterPanAuthorPeterPan
Aether_10101:small personal criticism I unlocked the chapters up to chapter 59, and I find that the interactions between the Mc and FL are a bit emotionless. The same goes for the other characters. I don't know how to write a novel so I can't give advice but I will still make a little aside on this problem of lack of emotion, of humanity for the characters. Otherwise good job