Cus I that it was earth something and then Hevenly

What realm is this

To fast first he weak against her killing intent then he magically trains to total curb stomp her isn’t that a little to fast like maybe the holy spear thing might work but it’s just he one shots her and somehow he becomes op in healing magic and you skip the system introduction you just named it then you make him to crazy things like torture for no reason then after the torture you recruit her but like the system is fairy king system so does it let you recruit anyone it stupid

To much profound shit do simple or ideas that are not stupid

Grandfather maybe Black Arm Zephyr

I know this is cool in all but is he ever going to learn magic or no or can he not because think his powers will get boring if hi does not use his dragon powers but are you saving the dragon powers when they on tenro island

It’s good though

Way so long no one cares and he will die and go to Naruto

You ruined it Like you just throwing characters out there because it should be just be about Pokemon and classroom of elite but there are like 12 Characters that get put in front of you to understand them and we’re they come from because I don’t know a lot of the characters you should of started At childhood so you get world background and is there a pre teen Pokemon league so you can do a story about that then he goes to school and you slowly introduce characters and develop them and clans and special powers and development of the powers because he is op at the start with no development of course powerfully my can be fun but you did it wrong

Does he have magic or no just haki or is haki and devil fruit magic because he has been using something that not magic how did he join a magic guild because I think there are different powers other then magic like alchemy stuff I think there’s them like priestesses to moon goddess/Dragon

Nessa And Sabrina

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Good story but you started it with no backstory like him growing up and you put in so many different characters that it is like you are not making it about classroom of elite and way is hi in d class other then plot characters have no development

You know skills permanently take magic

You know what would be funny in a new book were you are reborn in Naruto but you don’t like fighting and you’re not from any village and when any war or fights start he is there to beat everyone up and heal them good 😊

Ace has conquers haki but he never lernd it cause I think he unlocked it at young age

Hey what if there is a fairy tail fanfic with soul reaper or Arrancar or Quincy or Fullbringers take over magic as the main character

Is not funny any more were they don’t believe her trope

What about akeno cousin

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