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I really tried to give it a shot and made it past chapter 60, but it seemed to be the main character suffering from memory loss just getting dragged around to complete plot points. He doesn't know anything about the world or what is going on, so by extension neither does the reader making it is difficult to enjoy. The grammar was good though I'll give the author that.
A really interesting story once you get a couple of chapters in and it starts making sense. However just as it starts getting really good all the chapters get jumbled up and out of order with some missing making it impossible to read the story. I loved the story itself, I just wish it wasn't butchered and then reassembled on this site because I can't find it complete anywhere.
This is probably the most enjoyable Cultivation novel I've read so far. The grammar is pretty good and the plot points with raising the insects are very interesting.
This novel is based on a good idea, and the writing quality is very good compared to other books on this site. However, it is extremely fast-paced with tech advancements and socioeconomic developments happening in the blink of an eye. I think it would be helpful for the novel to slow down and flesh out what happens to make each development and allow for some conflict and character growth to happen more naturally rather than all of the sudden.