Review Detail of c9542 in Galactic Order: The System Unveiled

This novel is based on a good idea, and the writing quality is very good compared to other books on this site. However, it is extremely fast-paced with tech advancements and socioeconomic developments happening in the blink of an eye. I think it would be helpful for the novel to slow down and flesh out what happens to make each development and allow for some conflict and character growth to happen more naturally rather than all of the sudden.