Is it just me or are the chapters changing size? :/

Do you release additional chapters elsewhere?

“Wow, this novel is awesome, bro!! It caught me by real surprise, congratulations to the author. It kinda reminds me of Modern Family with the characters’ comments. I really like the main character’s personality, actually, all the characters are well-developed. Keep up the good work, bro.”

(Currently, I’m at chapter 296) For moments like this, I think the story is becoming boring. If there’s not going to be a harem, why make every girl the MC meets end up liking him? If it’s going to follow the romance route between Alice and Rey (which is the most obvious outcome), make only her develop romantic feelings, and in the end, come up with some lame excuse like: “Now I know what I felt for him was like a friend’s love.” Or even worse, make all the girls he has been in contact with experience romantic disappointment when he chooses just one. Honestly, I see that these won’t be the only girls who will develop an interest in him, which is kind of ridiculous since the MC as “Rey” did absolutely nothing to be interesting. Quite the opposite, in every appearance of Rey, the author tries to describe him as being as normal as possible, sometimes it’s even pitiful, honestly. It’s okay to want the MC to have an average appearance, but the way the author is describing this makes us readers have a certain aversion. The author could create some characteristic for Rey that makes him different from the others, I don’t know? Maybe a muscular body, or the eyes… something that makes him stand out from the rest, so he doesn’t seem so “common”. (Sorry for the long review, I vented what was stuck.)

I’ll cry if there isn’t a harem.

It went unnoticed by me, I only realized now that you informed me, I ended up repeating more than I should have… sorry.

I simply can’t write in my language and expect the translation to work magic, I’ve tried, and it turned out almost unrecognizable, since Portuguese is a language where many words sound alike, making the translation terrible. And yes, the first chapter may have seemed “robotic” because it was one of the chapters I struggled with the most, and it seems to be the only chapter you read, but it doesn’t matter. Fanfiction is a form of entertainment, and if there are people who really like the way I’m doing it, (and there are) I will continue. When the majority of readers find the way I’m doing it to be monotonous, that will be the time to stop.

I don’t even know if my comment will get through, because I have already deleted the comment, but then I regretted it a few minutes later… you simply completely devalued my effort to do something fun for the readers, starting with the fact that you read 1 or 2 chapters, and drew your own conclusions, and then about the AI part, which is simply impossible to make a fanfic in this way, if it could be done, there would be no authors, secondly, I’m Brazilian, I have to use the app’s translation to translate it into English, and I specify that I want to translate it in a clear way so the AI translates it in a way that everyone understands and this can generate some characteristic words, and about the dialogues, honestly, I don’t know if you’ve watched the series, but they talk like this the entire series, so I don’t understand why such eloquence on your part, and the AI is there to help so I don’t see the point in devaluing work that had the support of the AI, after all, the goal of every author is the same, to bring something fun and have fun in the process, since we are not making any money with it, but anyway, success to you.

A good point, and yes, I am already planning chapters that will meet the demand of many readers, keeping in mind that I am following the episodes, to give readers a good immersion, and so they know what to “expect”. Currently, I am on episode 8 of the original series, so you can look forward to more fun episodes in the future… and about the mushy stuff, I am aware of it, but Raj’s job is an astrophysicist, so universe, stars, and cosmos are in his vocabulary, but I will try to cut down on the jokes about that and will add some academic achievements. Thank you very much for the helpful critique :3

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Sorry. It was meant to be just a reflection from Raj… I feel like I didn’t talk much about the whole thing with David’s memories, considering he’s the one who made everything possible, he deserves it ;-;

App Pinterest.

I thought I had changed the script since I expanded a lot and wrote things that weren’t in the original series. Also, I didn’t copy any original dialogue, but I still follow the episodes more or less to have a base, as I feel it’s a good immersion for you readers. However, I can make some chapters that deviate a bit from the script if you would like that, something involving Raj’s past maybe? We’ll see… thank you very much for commenting.

Thank you for commenting, it’s very important to know this. If you can, please leave a review of the FF, it helps the author. :3

“I didn’t create any OC, all the characters mentioned are those introduced in the series.”

In fact, the move with Raj and Penny was to make them closer, it was never my intention to pair them up, it was supposed to be just a fling for one night, for two reasons: 1-In the series Raj x Penny almost happened, but Raj got too drunk at the time and ended up passing out, that made me angry at the time, because it just made Raj an even more screwed up character, so I wanted to let them hook up from the beginning to bring satisfaction to the readers. 2-In the near future, I want a connection from Raj x Penny, but not romantically, I want something like best friends, something Penny can share her problems with both Leonard and her career and etc, so I used this one-night stand, to connect the two, you know?

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Tell me what you think, is the story good so far? Does it need more details? Do you want the story to stay from Raj’s perspective? Honestly, I’m in doubt. I feel that if I add too much detail, the story will become boring, or if I add too few, it will become meaningless. Help the author!!

It’s great work, author, keep it up, don’t give up. Many will come to criticize, but few know how hard it is for us BRs to translate into English… The FF idea is great, dude, very creative. I’ve always liked the Supernatural series, but unfortunately, there are few fanfics about it. It’s good to finally have some. The chapters have a good update rate, the characters are well written, and as the story progresses, you can see the evolution. Go for it!