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(Currently, I’m at chapter 296) For moments like this, I think the story is becoming boring. If there’s not going to be a harem, why make every girl the MC meets end up liking him? If it’s going to follow the romance route between Alice and Rey (which is the most obvious outcome), make only her develop romantic feelings, and in the end, come up with some lame excuse like: “Now I know what I felt for him was like a friend’s love.” Or even worse, make all the girls he has been in contact with experience romantic disappointment when he chooses just one. Honestly, I see that these won’t be the only girls who will develop an interest in him, which is kind of ridiculous since the MC as “Rey” did absolutely nothing to be interesting. Quite the opposite, in every appearance of Rey, the author tries to describe him as being as normal as possible, sometimes it’s even pitiful, honestly. It’s okay to want the MC to have an average appearance, but the way the author is describing this makes us readers have a certain aversion. The author could create some characteristic for Rey that makes him different from the others, I don’t know? Maybe a muscular body, or the eyes… something that makes him stand out from the rest, so he doesn’t seem so “common”. (Sorry for the long review, I vented what was stuck.)

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