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Ace_Harmony1yrReplied to GocaI do have a suggestion, it's called "old man dragon" it also follows a reincarnated person who gains a dragons body. This Mc gets reborn as a light dragon, and is generally kinder but still has a dragons pride. It's an amazing read but is sadly not releasing any new chapters.
Ch 237 Chapter 236: Meet again- Ace_Harmony1yrCommented
what a Chad.
And also as a personal reason when it comes to MMOs, I don't have any special skills or anything to stand out or make friends, I am your average gamer who plays just for fun. - Ace_Harmony1yrCommented
HA HA HA HA
Izuku picked up the shy Rathian and presented her, "She is Rías, she hatched just three days ago, from an egg that... came... out of... me..." - Ace_Harmony1yrCommented
"however they sounded *irritating* to do"
Thankfully however Alex had the system that let him gain new traits as well as improve the ones he already had. The [sharp claws] trait was no exception to this as it also had requirements to level up however they sounded irritation to do. In order to improve this trait Alex needed to grind his claws fifty times with a whet stone. This was easy enough to but Alex was hesitant because anyone who had ever scraped their nails across a chalk board could tell you the feeling was far from pleasant. - Ace_Harmony1yrCommented
"pretty much any type of body you could *think* of"
This was obviously unacceptable for Alex since it meant he would need to change his entire way of fighting. Were he still human this wouldn't be a problem since there were a huge amount of martial arts tailored for pretty much any type of body you could thing of. Unfortunately not even a genius at martial arts could create a style from scratch that worked perfectly for a draconic body such as Alex's. The reason for this was due to how different the two types of bodies were whether it was bone structure , musculature or even the extra limbs that he had. - Ace_Harmony1yrCommented
"Alex began to use *his* front claws"
Alex was too focused on getting him a slice of zorah to care about this however as he circled zorah's head to position himself to latch onto one of the dangly flesh beards. Alex had no problem doing this since zorah simply couldn't be bothered to stop him thanks to him being an insignificant creature in the elders eyes. This quickly changed however as Alex began to use hi front claws and tail to dig into the flesh beard rapidly. While these dangling flesh parts weren't filled with that many nerves it didn't mean there weren't any at all. - Ace_Harmony1yrCommented
eyy there we go.
Unlocking the last trait however pushed Alex over the edge into his growth requirement letting him nearly triple in size over the span of a week. Alex's new size was roughly the same as the normal jagras that roam the ancient forest , or about the size of a small sized bull shark on earth. This was to say six feet long not including his tail that was as always twice as long than his body. - Ace_Harmony1yrCommented
"Compared to a fifteen foot *shark*"
Alex was surrounded by bloody water after killing the fish and quickly fled the area with his catch since he didn't want to risk gaining the attention of the large sharks in the area. Compared to a fifteen foot sharp Alex was little more than a light snack and he knew it. Alex did indeed attract a sharks interest but since he made it to the dock before the thing could close the distance he escaped with his catch safely. "Oi! i didn't know you ate those things , we usually throw them back since they got little meat on them" the foreman said when he saw Alex's catch. - Ace_Harmony1yrCommented
"Salt in small amounts is *fine* to ingest"
Obviously Alex didn't intent to eat pure salt in large amounts to gain a trait for it since he would likely die before managing it. salt in small amounts is find to ingest even for animals like him but whole chunks of salt at once is lethal. 'Rather than tempt fate i think i'll go for a safer route and try and gain a poison resistance trait before aiming for a poison eater trait.' Alex decided before leaving his nest. No one knew why Alex wanted a poison shroom but since that was what he chose to take for the day from the stockpile no one stopped him either. - Ace_Harmony1yrCommented
Just skipped ahead to the last chapter that I don't have to pay for to check spelling mistakes. Really man, "palming"?a spelling mistake in the announcement that tells us we have to pay to read the rest is never a good sign.
This book has been deleted. - Ace_Harmony1yrReplied to Kernoel_77
ah alright, it just seemed really weird for him to still use his old name after what seemed like him accepting his new life, well that's good to know thank you.
Anyhow, back to mana training. Steve didn't have any skills that would allow him to feel his mana, so he somehow had to figure it out on his own. He started off simply, by sitting on the ground in his log, closing his eyes and focusing, thinking back to what he felt the first time he tried it. He didn't use <Meditate> because it simply showed the effect without a process, and he wanted to adjust the process to achieve a different result. Simply put, he was aiming towards a new Skill, though he had yet to figure out what that Skill was. But after a while, he felt the same thing again. He felt something of a puddle inside his own body, how best to describe it… - Ace_Harmony1yrPosted
So, to start, if you are looking through the comments to find a review that properly explains why you should (or in this case) should not read this novel, go no further! I only went a few chapters in and already got a perfect feel for how the author writes, and it's not good. While it's probably true the authors primary language is not English that's no excuse for the complete lack of character development or any other development for that case, good writers will make each character feel alive with well thought out interactions between the Mc and said characters, and each character should have a unique personality. what this author does is just plain lazy, for example, when our Mc meets his mother all we get in terms of info is she is "tender" no proper interactions between the Mc and parent that would show any kind of proper character development, simply put we don't get any proper feeling of attachment to the mother instead all we get is pretty much "this is MCs parent she is colored white and a fox , looks at MC tenderly" then an instant time skip. long review short, MC never goes into detail about anything in the story it's just a monologue of an event happening with no further details. It might get better but that's unlikely, I really hope it does or perhaps even get a rewrite because I am interested in the premise, just not the current way the story is told.
- Ace_Harmony1yrCommented
oh...this is so not how you should convey such important info.
A week passed before he was used to being a fox. My mother told us what kind of world we are living in. It was a world a brutal one in where strength reigns supreme and different races live for survival. The forces that dominate this world are the Demonic Beasts or Monsters, Angels, Demons, Humans, Demi-Humans, Undeads and Elves. - Ace_Harmony1yrCommented
well that's convenient.
From new memory from his inherited memory that became accessible after the second trial started, he knew that the strength of the shadow monsters would scale with his strength, 'I must defeat them with tactics and fitting skill, not just sheer strength.' - Ace_Harmony1yrCommented
He just accepted his new life and new name...so why is he still being referred to in 3rd person as STEVE aghhhh.
Anyhow, back to mana training. Steve didn't have any skills that would allow him to feel his mana, so he somehow had to figure it out on his own. He started off simply, by sitting on the ground in his log, closing his eyes and focusing, thinking back to what he felt the first time he tried it. He didn't use <Meditate> because it simply showed the effect without a process, and he wanted to adjust the process to achieve a different result. Simply put, he was aiming towards a new Skill, though he had yet to figure out what that Skill was. But after a while, he felt the same thing again. He felt something of a puddle inside his own body, how best to describe it… - Ace_Harmony1yrCommented
so...is he Mercury or Steve? Generally when reborn characters get a new name they just stick to one (the old or new one), so what's going on here?
And thus, Steve walked and walked and walked, until the sky brightened and he had to get home. It's not that he didn't find anything interesting though. He found a hugeass dead tree which was hollowed out but still standing, he found a few rabbit dens hidden in the ground, which he most certainly didn't accidentally fall into, he saw a few deers and a lot of squirrels and he even found a giant ass boulder, big enough to fit 20 adults on it. What he didn't find was a bigass stag. Now, he did find stags in general. Tiny young ones, that is. Not a single one of them qualified to be called anything other than a cub, so he went home. His only solace was the fact that there were no spiders or wolves around, which seemed to hint at it not being their territory, meaning the direction was probably correct. Now he only had to run a little to get a bit further tomorrow. - Ace_Harmony1yrPosted
I have not gotten too far into the story, but I already noticed a problem that needs immediate attention. spelling mistakes, a lot of words are just completely wrong or different from what the author is actually trying to say, make sure to proofread before posting or check the comments and fix the mistakes people are pointing out after, past that the story is good so far, keep it up.
This book has been deleted. - Ace_Harmony1yrCommented
did he uh, just slam his head on the keyboard for a second there?
This book has been deleted.