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Adorei. Parabéns. Gostei muito da história. Voc a conseguiu fazer algo bastante cohérente. E isso é muito difícil. A única coisa que me deixa triste seria o desenvolvimento do personagem. Verdade que ele cresceu para poder confiar nos outros de certa forma e não ver eles como simples ferramentas. De todo jeito gostei bastante do seu trabalho. Queria ler mais trabalhos seus.
Cara yandere is cool. I can understand the yandere fetish. But I don't understand why the author had to add more women to the mix. Would I have simply stayed with these first 3 women. Now I'm all for scatach. Sorry for the spelling error. But at the same time I can accept the other mothers' days with a bit of reservation since Ruby's mother is a bitch in vampire society. Considering he's only been human for a year, it shouldn't be so easy for the MC to accept that kind of agreement. Aphrodite is the biggest bitch of all. Sorry this Goddess of love, charm and other business is just bullshit. I'm starting to think the author might have a fetish for sluts. I say that I'm not criticizing. Everyone has the right to like what they want. But my point is not because you describe a woman as super beautiful that you should add her or them to the harem. This you did well because you concentrated on the yandere aspect of the Business. I just hope I don't see things like Victor started to enjoy watching his girls fuck each other. This would not come into question if it were only the mothers. I like Yuri. But I hate Yuri in a harem with a protagonist who is supposed to be the center of the Harem. It's not even when the protagonist is a woman I don't just fan when two members of the Harem start sleeping together. Well the author does what he wants then...
Nobody is going to tell the author that it is very stupid to use two weapons like that? Spear and sword? Seriously? Unless it's a form of training and he doesn't plan on using both weapons like that in a serious fight. He would lose. Dual swords ⚔️, I understand. Sword and gun, I understand. Double dagger I understand. Sword and dagger 🗡️, I understand. Great sword and short sword can also work but you can't use both at the same time efficiently. Same thing with the spear. He will lose some movement with the spear as there is a lot of movement where two hands are needed in using the spear. I think the author needs a little awareness regarding combat. Unless he wants us to turn our brains off to continue reading.