Review Detail of Hasan_Shopnil in Dragon Ball Z: The Core
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I had to give at least 1 Star but in my Opinion this fic deserves Negative Stars. I actually never knew a Systemless Fic could be this horrible and It's all because of Strong Acting Weak tag and FMC developing everything with just her Anime knowledge,Respect Man RESPECT,Everything FMC did after reaching the Hyperbolic Time Chamber,from Growing Senzu Beams without knowledge to creating her own dimension and retaining her Appearance of a Kid even after 100 Yrs,Everything is NONSENSE.🤢🤮
Dragon Ball Z: The Core
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Just because I feel an obligation to address this review itself, after seeing it for so long, I can’t blame anyone for agreeing with it. See the comments for more details, but the MC’s entire MO during her ‘getting strong’ period is figuring out the science that they glossed over in the canon, to improve on or create her own techniques based on the original ones she already knows of. Everything she learns has a reason that I try to explain as best as possible, inspired by the canon. If I fall short, I’ll attempt explain it in the comments instead. If you disagree on a constructive manner (see Ch. 4 comments for example) I will put in genuine effort to understand your position in order to improve my own. In fact, the writer of this very review inspired a certain chapter that will be released some time around chapter 40 or so. (If you read the conversation in the Ch. 4 comments, you’ll recognize the chapter he inspired immediately, but I’ll put a shoutout in the author’s notes as well.) As explained in the review that I myself posted, I will answer any questions to the best of my ability as soon as I am capable of doing so.[img=recommend]
Mac_Laurin_AGBONON:Pessoalmente eu posso aceitar que o MC ajé fraco. Não me importo de como ela ficou forte. Tá explicado o suficiente pra mim. O que não gostei é que ela tenha perdido tempo de tela. O que gosto numa fica é ver o MC interagir com o elenco e as mudanças que tal interação podem gerar.
Why should I bother? English is not my mother language but I still can write It(even though I make mistakes). I mean English is an International language and Second language for most of the countries on Earth and It's in the curriculum till High School Syllabus in most of the countries and If you still can't write basic English then your education is a waste,also in Social Media we mostly use English,most of the Fic in Webnovel is in English,If you still can't write a comment in English then how do you understand English text's meaning in fanfics? There I explained why I'm lazy to translate It.......
OLB:translate, lazy people
Dude, all you had to do was press the automatic translation option that exists in any browser, literally two clicks
Hasan_Shopnil:Why should I bother? English is not my mother language but I still can write It(even though I make mistakes). I mean English is an International language and Second language for most of the countries on Earth and It's in the curriculum till High School Syllabus in most of the countries and If you still can't write basic English then your education is a waste,also in Social Media we mostly use English,most of the Fic in Webnovel is in English,If you still can't write a comment in English then how do you understand English text's meaning in fanfics? There I explained why I'm lazy to translate It.......
OLB:Dude, all you had to do was press the automatic translation option that exists in any browser, literally two clicks
I'm not talking about downloading any application, I'm saying that in any standard browser you have on your cell phone or PC there is the automatic translation option, In Chrome, for example, just press the [three dots] and it appears💀 well just forget about it, it doesn't matter anymore
Hasan_Shopnil:But I'm using a smartphone and I don't want to download any additional translator apps.
OLB:I'm not talking about downloading any application, I'm saying that in any standard browser you have on your cell phone or PC there is the automatic translation option, In Chrome, for example, just press the [three dots] and it appears💀 well just forget about it, it doesn't matter anymore
OLB:I'm not talking about downloading any application, I'm saying that in any standard browser you have on your cell phone or PC there is the automatic translation option, In Chrome, for example, just press the [three dots] and it appears💀 well just forget about it, it doesn't matter anymore
??? Dude why are you telling me this? I always write my comments in English(even If I'm Weak in English or any Subject for that matter),Anyway I don't write my comments in any Other language as It's more convinient and Most people around the World using Social Media who comments Understands English.
Lc_The_Second:Fic is written in English, for consistency all interactions should maintain the same. Wants to come to complain in another language go to a fic written in your language. No one has any obligation to translate your comments. You wanting to be heard does not mean we want to listen.
What? Dude. I don't know if you noticed. But I didn't even mark my reply to any of the comments you did. If anything. I was criticizing people who write comments in other languages when the Fic is in English. Don't know why you thought it was directed at you though.
Hasan_Shopnil:??? Dude why are you telling me this? I always write my comments in English(even If I'm Weak in English or any Subject for that matter),Anyway I don't write my comments in any Other language as It's more convinient and Most people around the World using Social Media who comments Understands English.