Review Detail of IINeeRoII in THE DRACONIC PHOENIX(A Bleach fanfic)

I tried, I really tried, but there's something in your fic that makes me want to quit. 1.-I'm not interested in the harem or anything like that. (I like solid relationships instead of pokegirl ones. Especially considering his situation of continuous torture. 2.-The inclusion of silvye bothered me a lot, but I still continued. I would have preferred a pet instead of a daughter. 3.- Too much canon for my taste 4.- Despite his age, he is still not able to control himself emotionally. 5.- He does not behave intelligently for his purposes. You can gather allies or servants but no... nothing 6.-A very difficult start to overcome, the first chapters are very heavy, it makes you want to quit immediately. Anyway, there are many more reasons to stop reading it, but on the other hand I can say that your writing quality has improved, congratulations. I wish you luck with your fic.