this intier chapter sound like a Chinese xinxia novel

the ability to control all of his bodily function. like grow more hair heal his body by increasing cell regarachen or bio fead back

jack because he is a jack of all trades.

do a lite metal gear solid and star upp his own murcenery company. and star to fight and do some good in 3 world countrys. he can also use his intelagens to make tech of his own of make modification on the ones he have.

give him a sword or katana and call him Jack the Ripper or just jack like samurai jack.

the story is just so badly writen the is no form of carachter develop ment and he just goes from a zero to bad as killer if it a hacking system don't give him pyshykal bust in power making him stronger then a guy with robot arms. it just bad and cringe. you make him out to be a give no fuck bad as and charmer when in the first story you say he care for his family if he gets davids memory then he whole also love his mother. the fact that you have fance that like you storys scars me and descuste me.

food wars they shoude have both been have naked.

he does he gets it after the uchiha masicar

why don't you make it so Thor gets drunk and inpregnates a few mortals or historical figures. maby just loves like giaha just pregnant with a child not I marriage or a relecanship. or have him have a few ex.

why don't you make it so he can make life sword or fire that just troves around or lightning. he doesn't have to have a clone stab some one if it is not a condition. you can also meas with he's perception of time or take away all of he's senses.

question* not doubt

is the daughter he's because he docent seem he whose care bout some one else's child.

it a good story and the main car-actor grows with in his situation and you get to see the world how it changes shith his choices but why docent he have I kid that you can late follow in the story make min married's shepherdess mom and they where named after there husband but. that and make more update on the story but that just that and many some pieces of that you min in invention to get an ide of what you men.

why doesn't he just ckipel him like cut of his arm or legs or break it to point that he can't movie right.

is it not weird that a child has a lot of Jutsu when his father was weak and didn't leave any behind and the chakra recurrent alone who'd kill him like the vitality ring?

you can also pint out that a grup of peapol that are hunting kyubuui jinguraki who'd know how to take out the kyubbi

it takes time before the effect of choking takes effect but the panic is real

you forgot the interests is 1% with is 1 million

how come you don't have Thor make alcohol like wine or rum or different alcohol

are you going to have amataratsu or Hestia in the harem. you can also make it so he sleeps casually with mortals on occasion because his wife can't keep up with him and to spice things uppitiest in the bed room