the story is just so badly writen the is no form of carachter develop ment and he just goes from a zero to bad as killer if it a hacking system don't give him pyshykal bust in power making him stronger then a guy with robot arms. it just bad and cringe. you make him out to be a give no fuck bad as and charmer when in the first story you say he care for his family if he gets davids memory then he whole also love his mother. the fact that you have fance that like you storys scars me and descuste me.
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