This novel is captivating and compelling right off the gate. First person perspective is nicely done. Story flows well and the characters are very likeable so far. Lots of chapters right away. Keep it up, great work.

I love the passion put into this story. I also love the profanity. These characters and the dialogue is hilarious. Of course some grammatical errors but those can always be fixed. Keep it up

I really enjoy the world-building. Its clear that you've put a lot of time and effort into it. The story is fun an engaging right off the bat. Reading flows well. It has me looking forward to more, good work. Keep it up. Looking forward to see how the plot turns out

This is starting off as a very real and heartfelt romance story. Only a few chapters in and you can tell the direction of the story, and it make you want more. I enjoy the first-person perspective, the story is written well and is easy to read. Keep up the good work.

Here we go, ladies and gentleman. Her fate was sealed here.

Oh my....

Oh, nice twist.

How cute. By the way, id appreciate a review swap.

The premise for this novel is simply amazing - it alone can carry the story. But even still, the author brings in engaging characters, dialogue, interactions and more. An excellent romance novel, and I love stories in first person. Good work, and keep it up author.

Wonderful use of language on vocabulary. Right out the gate you are introduced into a unique world with a large looming menace. A wonderful Sci-fi novel, with great action. The main character, Gus, is a very likeable man. Keep on writing, great work

I have to agree this has great potential, keep on writing. I love the initial mystery built up in the first few chapters. The writing is smooth and your use of language is great. I love Cyril as the MC, and really hope you finish one day. Great work.

This is a very fun story to read. Excellent flow of language makes it easy to read. A very entertaining MC, with plenty of comedy and drama. It always has you looking forward to more. Keep on writing.

A very recommended read. The chapters flow well and the story is interesting from the get-go. Good characters and world building. Keep on writing. Great job.

This is a story full of mystique and entertainment. It will get you hooked from the mysterious world-building right off the bat. Great characters and dialogue make this a fun and engaging read. Love the main characters Keep it up, author.

I like it, its erotic and exciting. Right off the bat it sucks you in with an interesting premise and likable characters. The grammar, syntax, and description of the everything is very well done. Im looking forward to more, keep it up.

The story flows wonderfully. The characters are very likable and comedic. The authors use of language is excellent and the world built around these characters is very interesting. Great action scenes, a very fun read. Keep it up for sure

These characters have a complex relationship that takes time to flourish and build. Wonderful descriptors and lengthy chapters makes this a very enjoyable read. Please keep it up, author

An excellent romance story featuring an interesting power dynamic. First thing that I noticed was an extensive vocabulary. Fun and easy to read, characters are likeable, and world design is mystifying and interesting. Please keep it up

An extremely fun synopsis and premise for a story. Dialogue, grammar, and syntax is excellent. Likeable characters, with a story that immediately hooks you in. Please keep writing.

This has me captivated instantly. The story is heavy, and these characters feel real. Feng is a great character- rooting for you my man. Please keep writing, I'm enjoying this.