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Daoist_Chunibyoo

Daoist_Chunibyoo

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  • Daoist_Chunibyoo
    Daoist_Chunibyoo1mth
    Replied to Daoist_shini

    yup typical anti-protagonist theme. ..

    If I were to successfully pursue Jiang Xu?
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    Taking advantage of the beauty being poor, fooling her into being my girlfriend
    Urban · Peace every year
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  • Daoist_Chunibyoo
    Daoist_Chunibyoo1mth
    Replied to star_chaser666

    a simp will always be simp bro🤣

    So, the main goal moving forward was to win An Nuonuo's affection.
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    Taking advantage of the beauty being poor, fooling her into being my girlfriend
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  • Daoist_Chunibyoo
    Daoist_Chunibyoo11mth
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    *how MysticVerse was made

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    Sundaram Tamas in the Mystic Verse
    Fantasy · chimychimes
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  • Daoist_Chunibyoo
    Daoist_Chunibyoo11mth
    Posted

    bro I'm very happy that you mention how MysticVerse and shouting out my pen name but it's chunibyoo

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    Sundaram Tamas in the Mystic Verse
    Fantasy · chimychimes
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  • Daoist_Chunibyoo
    Daoist_Chunibyoo11mth
    Commented

    will there be any update this month?

    """Yes Lord Gu""" immediately, they all began to leave the Gu mansion.
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    Re-Life: Life as a Demon Patriarch
    Games · Daoist_Xuyi
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  • Daoist_Chunibyoo
    Daoist_Chunibyoo11mth
    Posted

    it's been a month, will there be any update? usually 1 chapter was release per month. .. ..

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    Re-Life: Life as a Demon Patriarch
    Games · Daoist_Xuyi
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  • Daoist_Chunibyoo
    Daoist_Chunibyoo1yr
    Commented

    knock²

    Ch 10 Chapter 10, The old monk's dharma name... Mess!
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    My younger sister is the big villain
    Fantasy · Devil_Prince_Asura
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  • Daoist_Chunibyoo
    Daoist_Chunibyoo1yr
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    Ch 79 Chapter 79: some days later
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    Re-Life: Life as a Demon Patriarch
    Games · Daoist_Xuyi
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  • Daoist_Chunibyoo
    Daoist_Chunibyoo1yr
    Posted

    if the plots are more polished that would be great without the rush or awkwardness in the lines(convo) . .. ... . .

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    I'm a Villain not a Hero
    Fantasy · CSManga
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  • Daoist_Chunibyoo
    Daoist_Chunibyoo1yr
    Posted

    Good Plot:✅ Updating stability:✅ tempo:✅ story:✅ overall it's good. check out guys.

    This book has been deleted.
  • Daoist_Chunibyoo
    Daoist_Chunibyoo1yr
    Commented

    overall it's good without any huge problem.

    Ch 12 Gaining Experience
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    Villain: Destiny Transfer System
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  • Daoist_Chunibyoo
    Daoist_Chunibyoo1yr
    Commented

    Replace do with don't. they are asking negative question not positive question. They are asking for they were not sure that the mysterious warrior know their black thunder bandit's group territory.

    "Who are you? Do you know this is the black thunder bandit group's territory?" one of them sneered, pointing a dagger at Wang Chen.
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    Villain: Destiny Transfer System
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  • Daoist_Chunibyoo
    Daoist_Chunibyoo1yr
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    "Wang Chen stood tall and fearless, as the bandits draw their weapons and closed in on him. "

    Wang Chen stood tall and fearless as the bandits closed in on him, weapons drawn.
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    Villain: Destiny Transfer System
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  • Daoist_Chunibyoo
    Daoist_Chunibyoo1yr
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    "They started acting tough to buy time until reinforcement arrive and prepared for the worst. "

    As they looked at Wang Chen, they could sense that this was not going to be a peaceful conversation. They knew that they were not a match for this powerful warrior, so they needed to be prepared for the worst and then they started acting tough to buy time until reinforcement arrive.
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    Villain: Destiny Transfer System
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  • Daoist_Chunibyoo
    Daoist_Chunibyoo1yr
    Commented

    After this para put a marker to make the readers know that PoV has change. . like 3rd Or Author's PoV. and start.

    I scanned their cultivation base with my spiritual sense and determined that they were only at the sixth to the eighth stage of the body refinement realm.
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    Villain: Destiny Transfer System
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  • Daoist_Chunibyoo
    Daoist_Chunibyoo1yr
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    "With my cultivation of Enlightenment realm I can easily kill but I need to hone my combat skills. "

    With a sense of determination and a hint of nervousness, I made my way towards the bandit den. My cultivation level was at the peak of the enlightenment realm, and I knew that with my cultivation, I could easily kill the bandits. But, I also knew that I needed combat experience to truly hone my skills.
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    Villain: Destiny Transfer System
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  • Daoist_Chunibyoo
    Daoist_Chunibyoo1yr
    Commented

    it's good but it sounds like exaggerated narcissists.

    Before I knew it, the Bandit Den was in sight. I had made it in less than an hour, proving to myself that I truly was a master of the technique.
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  • Daoist_Chunibyoo
    Daoist_Chunibyoo1yr
    Commented

    " a powerful skill that allowed me to make my body as light as cloud and move at a lightning speed" as the technique was called Cloud Step Technique it will be nice to show why Cloud was in the name technique.

    I had mastered the Cloud Step Technique, a powerful skill that allowed me to move with lightning speed. I couldn't wait to put it to the test on this journey. As I made my way through the mountains, I felt a sense of excitement building within me. I knew that this journey would be the perfect opportunity to hone my skills and become stronger than ever.
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    Villain: Destiny Transfer System
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  • Daoist_Chunibyoo
    Daoist_Chunibyoo1yr
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    " It will atleast take six hours for a foundation building realm to reach it but for me, as an enlightenment realm cultivator, I would cut that time in half. " I just thought it will be more beautiful it written like this.

    My destination was the infamous Bandit Den, hidden deep within the Ku Jing Mountains. The journey was said to take at least six hours for a cultivator of the foundation-building realm, but I knew that as an enlightenment realm cultivator, my speed and agility would cut that time in half.
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    Villain: Destiny Transfer System
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  • Daoist_Chunibyoo
    Daoist_Chunibyoo1yr
    Posted

    it's good guys trust me check it out. you will not regret it.

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    New King Of Eternal Lands
    Fantasy · Kita8944
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