yup typical anti-protagonist theme. ..
a simp will always be simp bro🤣
will there be any update this month?
if the plots are more polished that would be great without the rush or awkwardness in the lines(convo) . .. ... . .
Good Plot:✅ Updating stability:✅ tempo:✅ story:✅ overall it's good. check out guys.
Replace do with don't. they are asking negative question not positive question. They are asking for they were not sure that the mysterious warrior know their black thunder bandit's group territory.
"Wang Chen stood tall and fearless, as the bandits draw their weapons and closed in on him. "
"They started acting tough to buy time until reinforcement arrive and prepared for the worst. "
After this para put a marker to make the readers know that PoV has change. . like 3rd Or Author's PoV. and start.
"With my cultivation of Enlightenment realm I can easily kill but I need to hone my combat skills. "
it's good but it sounds like exaggerated narcissists.
" a powerful skill that allowed me to make my body as light as cloud and move at a lightning speed" as the technique was called Cloud Step Technique it will be nice to show why Cloud was in the name technique.
" It will atleast take six hours for a foundation building realm to reach it but for me, as an enlightenment realm cultivator, I would cut that time in half. " I just thought it will be more beautiful it written like this.