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Porthos10

Porthos10

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student and beginner writer I may make mistakes, so tell me so that I can fix it currently have no time to write

2021-04-09 JoinedFrance
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  • Porthos10
    Porthos101mth
    Commented

    😴

    Ch 40 Chapter 40: “Harry’s Martial Arts Journey”
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    Harry Potter and the Silent Guardian
    Book&Literature · TalesByJaz
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  • Porthos10
    Porthos101mth
    Commented

    I asumme most of the readers were not so patient.

    Ch 24 Chapter 24: “The Turn of Fate”
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    Harry Potter and the Silent Guardian
    Book&Literature · TalesByJaz
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  • Porthos10
    Porthos101mth
    Commented

    the last paragraph is like a chat gpt story

    Ch 21 Chapter 21: “The Diverging Journeys”
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    Harry Potter and the Silent Guardian
    Book&Literature · TalesByJaz
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  • Porthos10
    Porthos101mth
    Commented

    no author reaction. as an author myself I consider you as a coward 😤

    Ch 20 Chapter 20: “The Path Unchosen”
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    Harry Potter and the Silent Guardian
    Book&Literature · TalesByJaz
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  • Porthos10
    Porthos101mth
    Commented

    just fix your common mistakes pls

    During the nigth due to the sudden attack of the masked man the nine tails was released and lord fourth sacrifisied his life for the village to seal the nine tails .
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    Nartuo: Reborn In Shimura clan
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  • Porthos10
    Porthos101mth
    Replied to _Wint3r_

    we can leave the story but do not lie, saying that there are no fillers[img=faceslap] it's a slow pace story with 50 chapters that can be gathered in 25 and even some of them have no utility. I thought you were different from patreon author but maybe I was wrong

    [8:01]
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    Naruto: Subject #37
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  • Porthos10
    Porthos103mth
    Posted

    just read the 2 first arcs, and you'll understand ...even the main characters in the first Disney movies encounters more difficulties. Boruto 5 years old, wants to learn new skills he ask naruto friend and it's done. he learns new skills in one try, flirts with every girl whatever their ages and nobody care about that....if you manage to avoid that in your read, it's not bad written.

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    A New Leaf: Rebirth in the Shinobi World
    Anime & Comics · Taidanotsumi
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  • Porthos10
    Porthos103mth
    Commented

    ....everything is fine with the MC. he gets what he wants freely at the age of 7.am I the only one who see a problem in the story?? even Chinese ff with OP characters are more logical.

    Ch 17 Chapter 17: The Sage Equal To Heaven
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    A New Leaf: Rebirth in the Shinobi World
    Anime & Comics · Taidanotsumi
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  • Porthos10
    Porthos103mth
    Replied to HeWhoWasRevered

    just read your paragraph.

    Shisui along with his friend Itachi that he meet on the way to check for daisuke at the small forest,the two we're seen having a conversation about something as they entered the forest they began to split up to cover more ground as 2 minutes later Itachi found Daisuke lying down near a tree seemingly in an unconscious state as he decided to check if his still breathing.
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    Naruto:Mr.Origion
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  • Porthos10
    Porthos103mth
    Commented

    read each of yours paragraphs so that you're sure thir sounds good and are understandable.and ADD A SPACE WHEN YOU HAVE A PUNCTUATION

    Ch 2 Nani???
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  • Porthos10
    Porthos103mth
    Commented

    mistakes

    Shisui along with his friend Itachi that he meet on the way to check for daisuke at the small forest,the two we're seen having a conversation about something as they entered the forest they began to split up to cover more ground as 2 minutes later Itachi found Daisuke lying down near a tree seemingly in an unconscious state as he decided to check if his still breathing.
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    Naruto:Mr.Origion
    Anime & Comics · HeWhoWasRevered
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  • Porthos10
    Porthos103mth
    Commented
    Ch 29 Chapter 29: Annoying Friends
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    Naruto: The Birth Of Fenrir and his Keeper
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  • Porthos10
    Porthos103mth
    Commented

    why did you delete the 2 last chapters?

    Ch 10 Chapter 1.10 [10]
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    The Cycle of Hatred: A Naruto SI
    Anime & Comics · EternalYujin
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  • Porthos10
    Porthos103mth
    Posted

    a copy from the original on ffn. net so just usurpation and maybe making money on it

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    Harry Potter : Reborn as Hagrid
    Book&Literature · Demonun
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  • Porthos10
    Porthos103mth
    Replied to Porthos10

    oh no sorry you just update it

    As usual, Chapter 12 is up on the Patréon if you'd like to take a peek at it a week early -- https://www.patréon.com/eternalyujin.
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    The Cycle of Hatred: A Naruto SI
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  • Porthos10
    Porthos103mth
    Commented

    you already post it

    As usual, Chapter 12 is up on the Patréon if you'd like to take a peek at it a week early -- https://www.patréon.com/eternalyujin.
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    The Cycle of Hatred: A Naruto SI
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  • Porthos10
    Porthos103mth
    Replied to LuciusAgares

    sage arts and more use of chakra releaseand I still think if I give him a kekkei genkai/pseudo kekkei genkai of snow( like in the snow country)

    Ren nodded, his eyes fixed on the baby. "Yes, there's something unique about him. It's almost as if he already understands what's going on around him."
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  • Porthos10
    Porthos103mth
    Replied to LuciusAgares

    sorry, but no.

    Ren nodded, his eyes fixed on the baby. "Yes, there's something unique about him. It's almost as if he already understands what's going on around him."
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  • Porthos10
    Porthos103mth
    Commented

    original 👏

    Ch 11 Chapter 11
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    The Cycle of Hatred: A Naruto SI
    Anime & Comics · EternalYujin
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  • Porthos10
    Porthos103mth
    Commented

    this one is not boring and has got a great utility to us

    Ch 12 Tale of the tailed beasts
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    Crazy Idiot of Suna
    Anime & Comics · Nefarious_Dragon
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