Porthos10
beginner writer Alt of azulf. Like this kind of novels: Kingdom building Fanfiction: Got Naruto One piece Aot
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At what point am I your brother? Keep a little respect in your stupidity, it will serve you in your everyday life
It's really a slow pace story
It will be original and interesting to see haelena with a celtigar instead of aegon
you get a new reader
it will change from the ordinary one piece fanfics .
And you're also not smart
You didn't read the chapter
I have to say that I stopped reading this fic after no update and there has been a rewrite 16 days before I write this. So maybe my review is unuseful
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Just an unuseful cliffhanger
Thanks for your hard work
Thanks for the chapter
Try to write more complex sentences because your sentences make often Vin sounds too repetitive