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At what point am I your brother? Keep a little respect in your stupidity, it will serve you in your everyday life

It's really a slow pace story

It will be original and interesting to see haelena with a celtigar instead of aegon

you get a new reader

it will change from the ordinary one piece fanfics .

And you're also not smart

You didn't read the chapter

I have to say that I stopped reading this fic after no update and there has been a rewrite 16 days before I write this. So maybe my review is unuseful

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Just an unuseful cliffhanger

Thanks for your hard work

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Thanks for the chapter

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Try to write more complex sentences because your sentences make often Vin sounds too repetitive