Porthos10
student and beginner writer I may make mistakes, so tell me so that I can fix it currently have no time to write
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just fix your common mistakes pls
we can leave the story but do not lie, saying that there are no fillers[img=faceslap] it's a slow pace story with 50 chapters that can be gathered in 25 and even some of them have no utility. I thought you were different from patreon author but maybe I was wrong
just read the 2 first arcs, and you'll understand ...even the main characters in the first Disney movies encounters more difficulties. Boruto 5 years old, wants to learn new skills he ask naruto friend and it's done. he learns new skills in one try, flirts with every girl whatever their ages and nobody care about that....if you manage to avoid that in your read, it's not bad written.
just read your paragraph.
mistakes
oh no sorry you just update it
you already post it
sage arts and more use of chakra releaseand I still think if I give him a kekkei genkai/pseudo kekkei genkai of snow( like in the snow country)
sorry, but no.