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Adrion_Lord

Adrion_Lord

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Just know if you disagree with me ur wrong

2021-02-17 JoinedDominican Republic
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  • Adrion_Lord
    Adrion_Lord4d
    Commented
    "Oh, I am just going to get something. You should go back to bed... It's getting late."
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    Zombie Apocalypse: Creation
    Fantasy · IPI
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  • Adrion_Lord
    Adrion_Lord4d
    Commented

    You said no, she just didn't care

    Please, don't blame yourself. You don't need to be sorry. It's my fault. I should have resisted harder. But I didn't. I fell into temptation. I couldn't hold myself together and said no when I had the chance.
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    Zombie Apocalypse: Creation
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  • Adrion_Lord
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    Commented

    when you realize you raped your son:

    "Xiaoyun, I'm so sorry! Please forgive me... No, don't forgive me, I don't deserve it! Just kill me! I don't deserve to be your mother!"
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    Zombie Apocalypse: Creation
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  • Adrion_Lord
    Adrion_Lord4d
    Commented
    Xiaoyun was finally able to pull his leg back, but it was already bleeding from a bite mark.
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    Zombie Apocalypse: Creation
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  • Adrion_Lord
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    Commented

    In reality you would probably have to use all of your strength and body weight if you want to guarantee someone will die with a single blow to the head

    "That was way too much force." Xiaoyun reflected as he looked down at his clothes being tainted with blood.
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    Zombie Apocalypse: Creation
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  • Adrion_Lord
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    Replied to Malcolm_Massey

    Not even close to being as bad as in the city, where millions leave instead of rural places where you may have to walk for miles to meet your neighbor if you find a big territory. You would struggle to find a place ready for the apocalypse even more in a city so it's not a unique problem to rural areas, but they are at least much less densely population and have access to water sources and food

    "Everybody is saying that going to the countryside is the safest since there are fewer people there...
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    Zombie Apocalypse: Creation
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  • Adrion_Lord
    Adrion_Lord4d
    Commented

    This is the part where i would kill myself. Maybe not instantly but if i cant get to a safe place soon i would just die. Those zombies are basically impossible to deal with, being fast and smart

    "Here's a video I saved. The zombies could even build a human ladder like those movies."
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    Zombie Apocalypse: Creation
    Fantasy · IPI
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  • Adrion_Lord
    Adrion_Lord4d
    Replied to Calm_Mountains

    I already got a headache reading the first few chapters, these are very basic writing mistakes i'm talking about, so i dont need 100 chapters to know if its good when the beginning has so many issues

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    Fantasy · Calm_Mountains
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  • Adrion_Lord
    Adrion_Lord4d
    Commented

    Bro she literally raped you

    "I'm sorry... I-I will accept all responsibility. It's my first time, and I couldn't hold it." Xiaoyun bowed his head and apologized again.
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    Zombie Apocalypse: Creation
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  • Adrion_Lord
    Adrion_Lord4d
    Posted

    Pretty bad overall. The author doesnt know how to write proper dialogues and they are very stiff. The entire novel is him telling whats happening insteaf of showing us with his writing. He doesnt even give us the appearance of the characters, which are extremely bland and cliche for this genre. This feels more like a draft than a properly written story

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    Fantasy · Calm_Mountains
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  • Adrion_Lord
    Adrion_Lord4d
    Commented

    Dude at least describe their appearance

    "Nice to meet you, everyone, I am Kira Bloodlight, and I am a mage. I am looking forward to our academy life"(Kira)
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  • Adrion_Lord
    Adrion_Lord4d
    Commented

    We saw none of it. I feel no emotion seeing him get stronger like this, this is just dissapointing

    Well, it looks like my hellish training was successful.
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  • Adrion_Lord
    Adrion_Lord4d
    Commented

    how convenient

    (It's not that Rio has an insane memory, it's just that the location of the chance was described very thoroughly in the novel that Rio read.)
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  • Adrion_Lord
    Adrion_Lord4d
    Commented

    This was too easy to get, makes it feel cheap

    'Moreover, this talent provides me with the improvement speed of a genuine SSS rank talent, thus I can improve myself as fast as an SSS rank potential holder, like 'that' villain guy...' (Rio)
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  • Adrion_Lord
    Adrion_Lord4d
    Commented
    Before Peter could reply his instincts buzzed as he turned to follow someone rushing in with unnatural speed - he had to will himself not to react in any way that would away his capabilities. 
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  • Adrion_Lord
    Adrion_Lord4d
    Commented
    "You're a mutant like us, I'm a mutant, and Bobby and Jean are mutants too and we gotta get you out of here to our school before some other mutants come and take you away, maybe, possibly, kill you cause you're powers are kinda special even for people like us and depending on who you ask you could be their answer to everything or they could hurt you because of it, and I think you should totally come with us cause we're like the good guys and the bad guys are gonna come find you and that'll be really bad for everyone so yeah…. Fffua" Kat interjected in one breath and finished with a breath. Everyone stared at her in shocked silence after her short unexpected speech. 
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    Marvel: Abysmal Spider-Man
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  • Adrion_Lord
    Adrion_Lord4d
    Commented

    I wonder if she can read his mind, she probably can now that his powers are sealed or she would be acting weird around him

    Jean had long vibrant strands of red hair that fell below her waist, clear green eyes, and a heart-shaped face. She was dressed modestly for someone who won the lottery in the genetics department. He was wrong she looked nothing like Mary Jane Watson, She had a confidence to her that most teens lacked as she held his gaze after introducing herself. Most teens couldn't do that, not anymore, not for very long. His glasses helped to hide that. 
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    Marvel: Abysmal Spider-Man
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  • Adrion_Lord
    Adrion_Lord4d
    Commented

    they're

    'I'll find them…I wonder what they're like …I really wanna meet them…I wanna get to know them…Oh and guess what! You're not gonna believe this…Their super spies!… I know right…bet you didn't see that coming…hehehe…Richard, May, and Teresa Parker…Super spy fam… on secret missions everywhere, saving the world is their day job… damn! Right?… I'm gonna go save them… their missing or something… but they're alive… I know it…Do you…Do you think they'll like me?' Peter took his hands from Garfield and did a simple stretch.
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  • Adrion_Lord
    Adrion_Lord4d
    Commented

    I hope he helps John get a house in the future

    "Alright then, whatever man, just take care of yourself alright, Here is one for the road, name's John by the way, I sleep just around the corner, stop by if you ever need anything," The man told Peter, he handed Peter a bottle of orange juice and after he said his piece he simply pushed his trolley down the road and resumed his stroll as if nothing happened.
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    Marvel: Abysmal Spider-Man
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  • Adrion_Lord
    Adrion_Lord4d
    Commented

    So basically Daredevil but mentally unstable

    Yeah, he would play the hero, of sorts, no, something more like an anti-hero, he couldn't picture himself leaving those thugs off with a little punch, not at all, he'd leave them with broken bones and twisted limbs.
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