Review Detail of Adrion_Lord in Reborn as an Extra

Item: Reborn as an Extra
Rating: 3

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Adrion_LordLv1325dAdrion_Lord

Pretty bad overall. The author doesnt know how to write proper dialogues and they are very stiff. The entire novel is him telling whats happening insteaf of showing us with his writing. He doesnt even give us the appearance of the characters, which are extremely bland and cliche for this genre. This feels more like a draft than a properly written story

Reborn as an Extra

Calm_Mountains

Liked it!

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Calm_MountainsAuthorCalm_Mountains

didn't even read past ch 10, how do you know the whole novel is like that?

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Adrion_LordLv13Adrion_Lord

I already got a headache reading the first few chapters, these are very basic writing mistakes i'm talking about, so i dont need 100 chapters to know if its good when the beginning has so many issues

Calm_Mountains:didn't even read past ch 10, how do you know the whole novel is like that?
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