specimen2
Writing
of reading
175
Read books
Badges
12Moments
311
specimen22dReplied to Potatownedto have gain experience before the plot
He knew he would be in this role for nearly a year before the official plot began. The thought made him uneasy as he couldn't confirm if it was the same this time.- specimen24mthCommented
we knew flint for 1 Chapter as a package deal of three, fgoodbye flint, you. will not be missed
Desperation filled the air as Flint called out, his voice tinged with fear. "Boss, save me!" But it was too late. The male ant was taken inside the mouth of a dark blue frog with ominous yellow eyes. The amphibian closed its mouth with a sickening crunch, devouring Flint without mercy. - specimen24mthReplied to Gilo_k
you say that like the mastermind doesn't already know that they are dealing with batman. What else do they think that the bloody batman would end an investigation before finding the culprit?
"Currently, Batgirl and Robin have begun investigating the mastermind behind the scenes, while Batman and I are preparing to solve the problem of the virus spreading in Gotham City." - specimen25mthPosted
at the start I actually liked this tale, a probe surviving ou tin the world while clearly not the smartest they grow, how-ever the writing cquality decreased, sure their was great moment like the mc's growth, the betrayal, and their moment with anaken, however it went like star verses fast , starting from slightly before the each treaty from the betrayel straight to the end of the star wars world into a ful on crash were the author basically said fuck it to all changes, friends, and units the mc had and their system, that hit like a trian right after the chapter of defeating Palpatine, from almost winning, to back to point zero, ever connected with the characters that changed from the movie, the heroes and protros that you see grow and change, fuck you it's all gone! off to the fucking wind! and even when you somehow are ok with that well well well, not only did the mc practically accomplish nothing, all said characters will die! it was just a, kick in the face, and it wasn't even that good, either way I couldn't go after that cuse I feel they'll just go to the next thing midway through and it will all repeat again
- specimen25mthCommented
. . . that helps absolutely nothing, so none of it mattered. The mc just goes to another universe, and all hands are cleaned, and nothing changed. Everything was just back, to . . . normal
" Yes, and no. You will still have all your protoss and zerg, but if we don't move out everything in a month, they would be erased. We should be thankful that he allowed us to collect everything we could. And even gave us whole month." System replied. - specimen25mthCommentedRight after this moment, I saw flash, and heard from the pilots that those ships began attacking. But I did not feel any vibrations from their shot. Shouldn't I feel it ?
- specimen25mthCommentedFor now, I should land Nexus on to the Shore. So I came into the Nexus, and got to the control panel. And began landing sequence. But before I could execute it, couple of warnings appeared, that I read, because skipping them last time almost killed me.
- specimen25mthCommented
I can almost see some deep see monster voting up passed the fish are disappearing
I bought fifty harpoons. it was worth it. 500 minerals for it is not much. So while being in lifted mood, I sent probes to go fishing and sell all the fish they get. to the other probes I got fishing nets. now lets enjoy show!! No more boredom for me!!! - specimen25mthCommentedAnd this ammount only resulted in me getting six minerals. not worth it. Would be, if my probes could do it too, but they can not work with liquids or gases.
- specimen25mthCommentedThe darker it was the worse I was feeling, something worries me, but I can't understand what. Like I missed something, didn't think about.
- specimen25mthCommented
dear me Gotham socks at security they might aswell be asking villains to steal files
'I thought the security in FBI facilities would be very tight. I didn't expect such big ventilation ducts, and they didn't even set any traps inside. What a pleasant surprise!' - specimen25mthCommented
man no wonder the place always gets broken out of or broken into, the thing can't tame a hit at all
An explosion instantly destroyed the prison gate. - specimen26mthCommented"Midoriya, do not bully your classmates!" he reprimanded as Midoriya rolled his eyes with a scoff.
- specimen26mthCommented
yes, the change you want, got it
- Mahatma Gandhi - specimen26mthReplied to DaoofShamelessness
Indeed the criminal escaping Archambault is normally a Monday and Thursday problem
"How did he escape? What about Killer Moth?" - specimen26mthCommented
this became death note really fast
When watching the surveillance footage, the "current" footage would be hidden from the view of the surveillance room, because they would be watching "past" footage. - specimen27mthReplied to DaoistGP4bCk
oh look I have written, and I also agree that the main comment was correct, the novel fell apart hard and fast, and became such a pain to read becuase of repeats, mix-ups, and of course the stupid logic from the book sometimes just to get a face slapping scene, even messing up worldbuilding already said
- specimen27mthReplied to Master_Reese
- specimen29mthReplied to asdasdssf
- specimen21yrCommented
yet they can still somehow make a flying fortress with 6 hours and 1000 points
While an ordinary heavy mechs possessed a lot more redundancies, Gauge only received six hours of design time. He could not spare much energy in adding redundancies to his mech's internals when he had to invest most of his time in improving the flight systems.