A generic trash quality webnovel made of lazy writing. there is nothing more than the common trash elements like useless MC, face slapping, lack of proper logic, bare worldbuid etc. dont waste your time on this
Typhlix
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LIKEoh look I have written, and I also agree that the main comment was correct, the novel fell apart hard and fast, and became such a pain to read becuase of repeats, mix-ups, and of course the stupid logic from the book sometimes just to get a face slapping scene, even messing up worldbuilding already said
DaoistGP4bCk:well thanks we'll keep that in mind but remind me again how many have you written yourself ??πππππ
One doesn't need to be a cook to check if the food tastes bad. Same thing applies in many aspects including novels. This is common sense but apparently some lack even that.
DaoistGP4bCk:well thanks we'll keep that in mind but remind me again how many have you written yourself ??πππππ
oh really? You can tell if a ladder is bad if it doesn't get you anywhere, and you don't need to know how to build one to say so. you are so fun ........and ridiculous
DaoistGP4bCk:well thanks we'll keep that in mind but remind me again how many have you written yourself ??πππππ