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vinthakadha

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i am a budding writer who wants to explore genres and plots that others have not used. having said that i also like to keep my stories simple. i like to tell stories from the view point of a layman.

2020-12-12 JoinedIndia
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  • vinthakadha
    vinthakadha11mth
    Replied to kamil3791

    thank you so much!

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    Mounika's Adventures
    Sci-fi · vinthakadha
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    vinthakadha1yr
    Replied to dozkiller07

    thanks for the comment

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    Sourabha Rajyam - The Land Where Women Don't Matter
    Fantasy · vinthakadha
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  • vinthakadha
    vinthakadha1yr
    Commented

    i have one suggestion. please avoid repeating the last lines of the previous chapter. those who read the previous chapter would know how it ended anyway. you could start with an ellipsis instead.

    The coordinator finished with his instructions and asked the three contestants if they had any questions. All three of them shook their heads and a conch was blown to indicate the start of the event. The three teams poured out of the tents and made their way to the garden area. They had heard the instructions while sitting inside and were raring to go.
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    Warrior Princess; Her Quest to the throne
    History · SMK08
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  • vinthakadha
    vinthakadha1yr
    Commented

    yaksha prashna!!!!

    She looked up at the ceiling and silently screamed, "Is this a physics question? Can someone help me please?"
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    Warrior Princess; Her Quest to the throne
    History · SMK08
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  • vinthakadha
    vinthakadha1yr
    Commented

    shabdabhedi!! an extremely hard skill that puts an archer leagues above others!!!!

    One of Vindhya's team members brought out a small bell and shook it hard, post which she went and stood behind the target board, immediately. Vindhya, who had been ready with the bow and arrow, let the shot loose at the sound.
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    Warrior Princess; Her Quest to the throne
    History · SMK08
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  • vinthakadha
    vinthakadha1yr
    Commented

    i fell for the misleading title of this chapter!!!! worth learning!!!

    Ch 207 Exposed (Part 3)
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    Warrior Princess; Her Quest to the throne
    History · SMK08
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  • vinthakadha
    vinthakadha1yr
    Commented

    putting a reluctant child in danger deliberately is cruelty. even if it is a royal child. let us see what happens next.

    Ch 2 The Moonlight
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    Cassandra The Dark Witch
    Fantasy · Aurora_Anindita
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  • vinthakadha
    vinthakadha1yr
    Commented

    A good start to the story. the extremist view of only one side is right and the other side is wrong and there cannot be a an alternate reality is a concept that has been the cause of many wars resulting in bloodshed, destruction of life and property. yet, it continues to serve as a strong plot for an equally strong story. i hope this story provides as good a plot as i expect it to.

    Ch 1 Cassandra's Strange Power
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    Cassandra The Dark Witch
    Fantasy · Aurora_Anindita
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  • vinthakadha
    vinthakadha1yr
    Commented

    nice !

    She walked outside the room swiftly and went in search of the kitchen and supplies. In a couple of minutes, both of them were ready to start their assigned duties. Abhirath hesitated before reaching for Shaurya's clothes. Even though he was injured, he was still a GUY! How could he do disrobe him in front of Mriga?? He shifted his gaze to the girl who had diligently started cleaning the room from the farthest end. Her eyebrows were furrowed in concentration and gaze remained focused on the floor.
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    Warrior Princess; Her Quest to the throne
    History · SMK08
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  • vinthakadha
    vinthakadha1yr
    Commented

    wasn't it Brighu and not Venugopal?

    He raised his head and said, "She is the perfect choice. I think they would be a good match, temperament wise as well. Mrignayani is a good foot soldier but sometimes acts willfully. I think Venugopal would have been a misfit. He is easily swayed by people."
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    Warrior Princess; Her Quest to the throne
    History · SMK08
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  • vinthakadha
    vinthakadha1yr
    Commented

    ah!! the real champion!!!

    Ganga smiled to herself, "She is an interesting competitor to play against. I have learnt a valuable lesson today."
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    Warrior Princess; Her Quest to the throne
    History · SMK08
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  • vinthakadha
    vinthakadha1yr
    Commented

    hahaha! a typical math problem that i hated so much!!!!

    "An archer is standing 600 metres away from a straight tree. There is a nest perched right at the top of that tree. The archer raises her bow and shoots an arrow at the nest at the speed of 500metres/second. It takes the arrow one and a half seconds to reach the nest. What is the height of the tree?"*
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    Warrior Princess; Her Quest to the throne
    History · SMK08
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  • vinthakadha
    vinthakadha1yr
    Commented

    it's such a thought provoking story and an axcellent one. but i disagree with the single language formula since it would mean forcibly destroying other languages in favourof a single one. a language is as important as the culture and destroying a regional language is as good as destroying that culture. because langauge and culture go hand in hand and cannot be separated. its like separating a baby from its mother. national integrity can still be achieved without having to destroy a unique language and culture.

    Depending upon a zilla's geographical location, the food habits, clothes, architecture took shape. Chandragarh had mandated the usage of one language across the country but everything else including the festivals and customs were peculiar to each zilla. The capital of Chandragarh had no specific cultural identity and was more a culmination of various cultures coming together due to influx of people coming their to study or earn their livelihoods, bringing their heritage along with.
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    Warrior Princess; Her Quest to the throne
    History · SMK08
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  • vinthakadha
    vinthakadha1yr
    Replied to Aurora_Anindita

    thank you so much!

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    Betrayed princess - Charming Prince
    Fantasy · vinthakadha
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  • vinthakadha
    vinthakadha1yr
    Posted

    I am not a fan of werewolf stories but this author wrote this story in a very enticing manner. The story of the unfortunate protagonist reclaiming her destiny always inspires curiosity and interest in the readers and this story successfully captures the reader's attention with a very strong narration. However, the language needs a little refining as some of the words and expressions used are jarring. I realise that English may not be the author's native tongue, still it could be polished more. i say this as a person who has learnt English as a second language and only in school. English is not my native tongue either, All the best to the writer.

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    The Alpha From The Aurelius
    Fantasy · RizzEditions
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  • vinthakadha
    vinthakadha1yr
    Commented

    the chapter is quite good. the action thrilling. yet the use of some words is like a stone in the shoe. It would be nice to revise this chapter without changing the plot.

    Ch 2 Prologue Saga II
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    The Alpha From The Aurelius
    Fantasy · RizzEditions
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  • vinthakadha
    vinthakadha1yr
    Commented

    expression.

    As soon as the latter's speech was finished, Diana's express turns into a mixture of confusion, shock and even terror because obviously, "How are you going to make it?" The queen questions.
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    The Alpha From The Aurelius
    Fantasy · RizzEditions
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  • vinthakadha
    vinthakadha1yr
    Posted

    i was pleasantly surprised to see this book in the ranking list. The story is quite strong and i was impressed by the narration. 152 reviews are an indication of the worthiness of this book. As an Indian it makes me quite happy to see a good book. kudos to the writer and i wish him/her all the best.

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    Warrior Princess; Her Quest to the throne
    History · SMK08
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  • vinthakadha
    vinthakadha1yr
    Posted

    Well, the story is quite captivating. after reading 12 chapters i simply added it to my library. there are more than a hundred reviews already and i don't want to repeat anything. so i made some chapter comments and might do so as i read the story further. All i want to say is if you looking for a good supernatural thriller, this book is right one. good job by the author.

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    Red Blood Century
    Fantasy · RomanceFanatic028
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  • vinthakadha
    vinthakadha1yr
    Commented

    the mystery is thick and the suspense beautiful!

    Ch 9 Got trapped into the loop
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    Red Blood Century
    Fantasy · RomanceFanatic028
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