Review Detail of vinthakadha in The Alpha From The Aurelius

I am not a fan of werewolf stories but this author wrote this story in a very enticing manner. The story of the unfortunate protagonist reclaiming her destiny always inspires curiosity and interest in the readers and this story successfully captures the reader's attention with a very strong narration. However, the language needs a little refining as some of the words and expressions used are jarring. I realise that English may not be the author's native tongue, still it could be polished more. i say this as a person who has learnt English as a second language and only in school. English is not my native tongue either, All the best to the writer.