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Fenris3212mthPostedMost of this is good, except our MC. He’s ruthless, but not in any fun way. He has no big ambition, no real long term goal save survival, and he is not a particularly smart or social cookie. Dependent on plot armor to get anything done. To be short, he’s obnoxious with no impulse control. Actively antagonistic even when it poses a threat to himself and taking incoherent risk with no thought (why test a blood crystal on himself when he can just force feed it to someone else). He’s not enough of an asshole to be memorable, just a dumb edgelord; and while that’s ok for a bit, it’s already wearing down my patience for him. Beyond that’s its a competently written, if generic, system-zombie novel. Not winning any awards and overpriced once you get to the paid stuff, but that’s the standard for this site.
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Putting something in your mouth is a valid scientific technique… but boy is this boy dumb
Whether he was the naturally inquisitive type who was capable of thinking of solutions that others were beyond conceiving, or if he was simply desperate to find out what exactly this crystal really was. Zane decided to make a brazen and risky action, one that could very well harm him. - Fenris3213mthCommented
How thoughtful, he left such a powerful cultivation resource
But because the turd exploded, it scattered everywhere. Some of it got stuck on Yan Luo's face and body while the rest splashed on the walls and ceiling. - Fenris3213mthCommented
Traditional Floridian courtship
Esen looked like a high-elf aristocrat from a Japanese anime! - Fenris3213mthCommented
Cultivation in progress
At first, the teenage maidens didn't notice the Qi source. But when they lingered in the rooms for five minutes, their sharp senses picked up the Qi insignia of the lightning element Qi strands. Unknowingly, they stopped making noises to cultivate the Qi. - Fenris3213mthCommented"Oh, yes," Leo was overjoyed. He slow-clapped and congratulated Ouyang Long.
- Fenris3213mthCommented"Oh, yeah. Leo Belmont is gonna hunt you Dracula down."
- Fenris3213mthPosted
It’s the Wattaburger of webnovels. Slow, small & overpriced… but just good enough to be worth it. Good slop The author is a pantser writer, throwing in things he thinks are cool, getting bored, and then discarding them. This has lead to mess of broken, conflicting plot threads with so many generic, but important, characters that Game of Thrones might get jealous; all strung together with the pacing of a runaway horse, where an inconsequential warehouse fight can get more attention and screen time then major plot and character beats The MC is a tryhard; sometimes endearing, mostly annoying, and always retarded. The rest of the cast is generic (mostly, Blaze and the Prince actually grew on me) and interchangeable. That’s good, because your going to get lost when the author constantly switches between 3-5 stories with every chapter and it would be annoying if I couldn’t just swap them out. … But it does just enough right that if you pick it up, it’s difficult to drop it. I can’t recommend it, I actively encourage you to stay away, it’s not worth the price; but there are worse ways to spend a bathroom break.
- Fenris3214mthCommented"Yeah." I confirmed. Anabelle went dead silent there for a moment, making me more nervous.
- Fenris3214mthCommented"Yes, you are. Now, why don't you have a seat over here?" I pulled a chair from near the desk as I sat down on my bed.
- Fenris3214mthCommentedThat weakness had been my child.
- Fenris3217mthCommented
Might I suggest… the Benellie M4?
"Here we go– the latest working model of Arquebus Arms' line of auto-loading rifle." Hustler One says, leading Leon and Angelica to a table. "We call it the Kalashnikov line. Robust, durable, and exceedingly adaptive; able to fire larger caliber rounds than what the current service rifle of the Holfortan Royal Army." - Fenris3211yrPosted
It’s face slapping novel. Seemingly designed to be painfully generic, it does encompasses all the worst parts of the genre. The MC is an insecure brat going on a powertrip, he has a system which gives him everything, and everyone is an autistic narcissist because that’s the only people our MC can “face slap”. If you enjoy the genre then it might tide you over, but it does nothing particularly well and the glacial pace only makes it more difficult to get through (30 shopping chapters in a row).
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Indeed, the floor was also made out of floor.
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Her brother
She raised her head and faced the kneeling Duke. "Return to the Southern Holy Kingdom, take my brother with you. If this fails, I want to ensure he is safe." - Fenris3211yrCommented
Ah yes, sending the most violent , discontent, and unhinged members of your reign to hold the single most important defenseive line. Genius.
"They haven't been united in over a hundred years, as long as that remains the case, we don't need to reduce the numbers for long, just enough to take back the capital. They lack discipline, unity, and order. As long as nobody gives them that, we can quickly right the situation here and then…" Calca frowned, "I believe some of the penalties involved with rioting can be modified… if they like fighting so much, let them serve at the wall. Every peasant caught with weapons or wounds from fighting, will be sent to the north east to the border with the Abelion Hills. That should increase our numbers more than we need." - Fenris3211yrCommentedWomen who participated in the slaughter, seemingly eager to display their bloody hatred of the corruption they saw in the heights of power, went an extra mile beyond their menfolk. Seen worn in the form of the scalped heads with long hair still attached and sewn into a form of twisted dresses. Long silken strands of golden hair, auburn hair, once part of beautiful or well adorned women of high status to display their wealth, were now reduced to a fashion statement.
- Fenris3211yrCommented"Remedios is very closely connected to my values, if she wants to investigate, I'm sure it is purely in the interests of the common good, let her go," Queen Calca asked. "We all know she wouldn't do anything to bring harm to my people. What could go wrong?" Calca asked, and when nobody argued, she gave Kelart a nod of approval, and the order was given.
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Princess MacCrazy
If there were any thoughts of rebellion, they were quashed at the sight of the unbeatable champion with ties to the new Carne Kingdom and the new Wolf Queen, with the power to crush and slay skeletal dragons all by himself, taking a side with the new Re-Estize administration. 'That worked out well,' Renner thought, 'father's plan wasn't bad, but Lord Demiurge's was better, but that's to be expected. I still need to satisfy my curiosity about whether Momon is Master Gown's son, or brother, or what… but for now it's enough to know… there's nobody left in my way.' - Fenris3211yrCommented
It’s not gay if their wearing socks, that’s just common sense
Huh? Really? Okay, I'm a pervert, but I'm not the least bit interested in watching an ecchi anime, let alone a hentai one --- together with two other guys.