Review Detail of Fenris321 in Dead Man Walking: Living By Day, Dead By Night

Most of this is good, except our MC. He’s ruthless, but not in any fun way. He has no big ambition, no real long term goal save survival, and he is not a particularly smart or social cookie. Dependent on plot armor to get anything done. To be short, he’s obnoxious with no impulse control. Actively antagonistic even when it poses a threat to himself and taking incoherent risk with no thought (why test a blood crystal on himself when he can just force feed it to someone else). He’s not enough of an asshole to be memorable, just a dumb edgelord; and while that’s ok for a bit, it’s already wearing down my patience for him. Beyond that’s its a competently written, if generic, system-zombie novel. Not winning any awards and overpriced once you get to the paid stuff, but that’s the standard for this site.