SarushiroEruma
Creative Writer. Novelist. And anything behind the scenes. "I am no critic. I merely reflect on the world through imagination." ig: @eruma_sarushiro
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SarushiroEruma2yrPostedREAD FIRST: Hi dear readers, author here! I'll be taking a short break from writing to get things going smoothly again. Creating can be tough, so maybe a breather would do to give you all some better quality writing. Also, I'll be taking this time to revise the earlier chapters, so PLEASE BE MINDFUL OF THE CHAPTER TITLES AND THEIR NUMBERS BEFORE SUBCRIBING. The chapters' numbers will change soon due to the editing. Again, thank you for all your support! I'll get back to you as soon as I can!
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author-sensei, I seriously dig the idea of the neon koi! that's true imagination at its finest 👌
"No one's there..." Ryo muttered to himself, leaning his back against the glass twin door. His attention immediately circled to his right, where a delightful entourage of blossoming pink and white flowers aligned with multiple spruce trees through a stone archway and path. Neon glowing koi fish swam against the current of a light stream providing water to the soil surrounding an exquisite crop farm of fresh fruits and vegetables. They had appeared to be tended recently, as the fertilizer glistened with the water beginning its absorption process. - SarushiroEruma2yrCommented
this gave me chills. I really admire you're style of writing, author-sensei
"There has never been a way back for me Master, not since this bastard, son of a whore, had the stupid dream of becoming strong." - SarushiroEruma2yrCommented
yohohoho! yohohoho!
They were no more than skin and bones. - SarushiroEruma2yrCommented
yet another nomination for parent of the year...
She knew her son. - SarushiroEruma2yrCommented
sssiiiiooooonnnn!!!
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alicization! I see that you're a man of culture as well
Who would decline such an offer when the game itself rewarded real-time money to players? They can cash in their checks, earn, and live inside the game. It even reached the government, where presidential elections were all held inside the fantasy world. - SarushiroEruma2yrCommented
wind breathing... first form...
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now, this is my type of world...
Who would decline such an offer when the game itself rewarded real-time money to players? They can cash in their checks, earn, and live inside the game. It even reached the government, where presidential elections were all held inside the fantasy world. - SarushiroEruma2yrCommented
quite an achievement for a grown man...
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Ralof?
"You've finally woken up." - SarushiroEruma2yrReplied to Lxpsy
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- SarushiroEruma2yrPosted
First impression sort of reminds me of the nonfiction novel I read years ago called "the game" by neil strauss. Lots of useful life lessons in here. But, the magic of this story presents itself when the theme suddenly twists into something surprisingly more interesting and enjoyable. Fun MC, well constructed plot, and "Handsomely" done, author-sensei! Keep updating.. really looking forward to this [img=recommend]
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Interesting take on the world of organized crime and romance within the gangs of the east coast. The way everything is described seems almost everything lives and breathes. I know not everyone's a big fan of violence, but even that is incredibly graphic to the point where one can feel the actual dreadful sensations.. which is a good thing if we're to set things up for a realistic story revolving the mafia. The pacing is just right that the story develops fast enough for the readers to understand how this magnificent plot is being presented.. not much dialogue in the beginning.. but more well constructed and detailed explanations for viewers to understand the complexity of what is really going on. Overall, the quality of this work is brilliantly done. The author's skill in storytelling has great potential.. and is arguably one of the better ones I've seen in this platform. Great job, author-sensei! Keep updating and inspiring your readers!
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