VQuintessence
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I would advise you to read the novel again as you might have missed a few things. Building a mansion underground was done with Earth Release, a technique left by his parents, thus it required no money at all. However, after what he has done in the latter chapters which I assume you saw and I don't want to spoil here, the problem of funds is no longer a problem. Also, I explained thoroughly how he exploited Shadow clone jutsu to create so many clones. It's broken but it took him a long time. Again, I really don't want to spoil things here.
The tags won't do the character of Isaac justice. Still, I don't know how to describe him exactly. Isaac is quite the complex character, the representation of the flaws in humanity despite seeking perfection himself. I can't call him a villain despite the majority of main characters in my stories being villains. They were considered villains by the characters in their worlds after all. Isaac, not so much despite the atrocities he will commit. Therefore, I hope you enjoy the complexities of his infinitely imperfect character as he pursues the unattainable, Perfection.
Thanks for the kind words, and good luck with your novel. It takes practice and continuous writing to improve, so I like you didn't start good at all. Just take people's criticism if not rude and seek improvement, and things should work out, so good luck again!
Finally, my first original novel, about an idea that I had a long time ago but never really felt like I could implement it due to my inexperience. Hopefully, I can now. The story will be very slow-paced as we follow Silver's very slow exploration of the Unknown, and as usual, the protagonist will certainly be kind, just like all my other protagonists. They're all somewhat in the middle, between evil and good, doing evil if it furthers their goals and not minding doing good if it's of no inconvenience, so if you're into that, hopefully, you'll enjoy this new journey that's filled with the Unknown with us!