Review Detail of VQuintessence in Naruto: Shadows Of Perfection
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The tags won't do the character of Isaac justice. Still, I don't know how to describe him exactly. Isaac is quite the complex character, the representation of the flaws in humanity despite seeking perfection himself. I can't call him a villain despite the majority of main characters in my stories being villains. They were considered villains by the characters in their worlds after all. Isaac, not so much despite the atrocities he will commit. Therefore, I hope you enjoy the complexities of his infinitely imperfect character as he pursues the unattainable, Perfection.
Naruto: Shadows Of Perfection
VQuintessence
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Thank you! For my original, I don't think I am gonna continue it. It's been such a long time that I have no passion for it anymore and it coincided with a terrible time in my life, so I'd rather not go back to it. However, I hope you can give this one a try! and hopefully, you enjoy it.
Semets:Hi, happy to see you back. I don't know if I will read this new ff of yours since I prefer to avoid the Naruto verse entirely but I might still give it a try, by how your previous stories turned out great. By the way, will you pick back up your original book with Silver, "Awakening" ?
VQuintessence:Thank you! For my original, I don't think I am gonna continue it. It's been such a long time that I have no passion for it anymore and it coincided with a terrible time in my life, so I'd rather not go back to it. However, I hope you can give this one a try! and hopefully, you enjoy it.
VQuintessence:Thank you! For my original, I don't think I am gonna continue it. It's been such a long time that I have no passion for it anymore and it coincided with a terrible time in my life, so I'd rather not go back to it. However, I hope you can give this one a try! and hopefully, you enjoy it.
I love Naruto ff and i’ve read a couple of your novels although i didn’t like how the ONE P one turned out but i liked the HxH and the marvel one Anyways is this gonna be a villain mc i mean he doesn’t have to be but at least make him antihero cuz i never get the naive and the good and selfless for the sake of being selfless MC’s like it’s just not relatable like aren’t humans selfish and self perseverant
VQuintessence:Thank you! For my original, I don't think I am gonna continue it. It's been such a long time that I have no passion for it anymore and it coincided with a terrible time in my life, so I'd rather not go back to it. However, I hope you can give this one a try! and hopefully, you enjoy it.
Isaac is very selfless only in his pursuit of perfection, good or bad doesn't matter. Therefore, he will do a lot of villainous things to further his goals but he will also do a lot of good. I hope that cleared Isaac's character a bit more for you, and I hope you enjoy the story!
The_8th_king:I love Naruto ff and i’ve read a couple of your novels although i didn’t like how the ONE P one turned out but i liked the HxH and the marvel one Anyways is this gonna be a villain mc i mean he doesn’t have to be but at least make him antihero cuz i never get the naive and the good and selfless for the sake of being selfless MC’s like it’s just not relatable like aren’t humans selfish and self perseverant
VQuintessence:Isaac is very selfless only in his pursuit of perfection, good or bad doesn't matter. Therefore, he will do a lot of villainous things to further his goals but he will also do a lot of good. I hope that cleared Isaac's character a bit more for you, and I hope you enjoy the story!
Hello i subbed for patrean and read the unreleased chapters and i’d like to give you a feedback that maybe you can use to improve the story and correct some mistakes. To be honest the interactions between characters is alright and good but there is a lot of unrealistic stuff that put me off like how he built a mansion underground while being idk like 7 and how he afforded it when his parents didn’t leave him much wealth sense you mentioned that pretty much all they left him is the shadow clone jutsu and the house as inheritance and then i feel like you made the mc just too op of the bat as in he has enough chakra to make enough shadow clones to turn into birds and cover the entire uchiha clan compound as they release flyers and not to forget that you made characters have very low IQ. Idk if you didn’t research Naruto enough or maybe you weren’t going for a proper and realistic type of ff but please pay attention and make something great that everyone can remember and if you need inspiration i recommend Naruto: Dream to Immortality fanfic
VQuintessence:Thank you! For my original, I don't think I am gonna continue it. It's been such a long time that I have no passion for it anymore and it coincided with a terrible time in my life, so I'd rather not go back to it. However, I hope you can give this one a try! and hopefully, you enjoy it.
I would advise you to read the novel again as you might have missed a few things. Building a mansion underground was done with Earth Release, a technique left by his parents, thus it required no money at all. However, after what he has done in the latter chapters which I assume you saw and I don't want to spoil here, the problem of funds is no longer a problem. Also, I explained thoroughly how he exploited Shadow clone jutsu to create so many clones. It's broken but it took him a long time. Again, I really don't want to spoil things here.
The_8th_king:Hello i subbed for patrean and read the unreleased chapters and i’d like to give you a feedback that maybe you can use to improve the story and correct some mistakes. To be honest the interactions between characters is alright and good but there is a lot of unrealistic stuff that put me off like how he built a mansion underground while being idk like 7 and how he afforded it when his parents didn’t leave him much wealth sense you mentioned that pretty much all they left him is the shadow clone jutsu and the house as inheritance and then i feel like you made the mc just too op of the bat as in he has enough chakra to make enough shadow clones to turn into birds and cover the entire uchiha clan compound as they release flyers and not to forget that you made characters have very low IQ. Idk if you didn’t research Naruto enough or maybe you weren’t going for a proper and realistic type of ff but please pay attention and make something great that everyone can remember and if you need inspiration i recommend Naruto: Dream to Immortality fanfic
VQuintessence:I would advise you to read the novel again as you might have missed a few things. Building a mansion underground was done with Earth Release, a technique left by his parents, thus it required no money at all. However, after what he has done in the latter chapters which I assume you saw and I don't want to spoil here, the problem of funds is no longer a problem. Also, I explained thoroughly how he exploited Shadow clone jutsu to create so many clones. It's broken but it took him a long time. Again, I really don't want to spoil things here.
Hello authors I'm going to be direct one day I'm going to make you an onpiece fanfic with Blackbeard as mc I would like to do it myself but I don't have the talent for that's why I'm asking of course I don't have any power Or right on your choice just a question how someone else knew this good bye (Google translate)
The Google Translate isn't very clear but I think you want me to write the fanfic myself, right? If so, I've unfortunately already written a One Piece fanfic, so I'm not gonna write one any time soon but maybe I will when One Piece ends, then I'll have new material to work with.
HolyDK:Hello authors I'm going to be direct one day I'm going to make you an onpiece fanfic with Blackbeard as mc I would like to do it myself but I don't have the talent for that's why I'm asking of course I don't have any power Or right on your choice just a question how someone else knew this good bye (Google translate)image
VQuintessence:The Google Translate isn't very clear but I think you want me to write the fanfic myself, right? If so, I've unfortunately already written a One Piece fanfic, so I'm not gonna write one any time soon but maybe I will when One Piece ends, then I'll have new material to work with.