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  • PreciousDane
    PreciousDane2yr
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    I love the wordings.

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    Behind the Veil : Vengeful Spirit
    Horror · nia94
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  • PreciousDane
    PreciousDane2yr
    Posted

    sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo The story is interesting and yeh of course full of mysteries ... first 2 chapters yet there's a lot of questions that needs to be answered.

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    Her Misery Ended
    Urban · DaoistQl11pjCieL
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  • PreciousDane
    PreciousDane2yr
    Commented

    WERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

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    Her Misery Ended
    Urban · DaoistQl11pjCieL
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  • PreciousDane
    PreciousDane2yr
    Commented

    Nice parenting huh XD

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    Her Misery Ended
    Urban · DaoistQl11pjCieL
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  • PreciousDane
    PreciousDane2yr
    Commented

    I can sense any sort of foreshadowing here hm

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    Her Misery Ended
    Urban · DaoistQl11pjCieL
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  • PreciousDane
    PreciousDane2yr
    Commented

    Hmm... interesting

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    Her Misery Ended
    Urban · DaoistQl11pjCieL
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  • PreciousDane
    PreciousDane2yr
    Posted

    I enjoyed reading the story. The flow of the narration is on-point, easy-to-read, and has less errors when it comes to technicalities. May the author continue writing this story. <3

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    Short Horror Stories
    Horror · not_sou_serious
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  • PreciousDane
    PreciousDane2yr
    Posted

    I enjoyed reading the story. The flow of the narration is on-point, easy-to-read, and has less errors when it comes to technicalities. May the author will continue writing this story. <3

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    Lies I Wish You Forgive
    Urban · Rahmat.R
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  • PreciousDane
    PreciousDane2yr
    Posted

    I enjoyed reading the story. The flow of the narration is on-point, easy-to-read, and has less errors when it comes to technicalities. May the author will continue writing this story. <3

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    DOUBLE IDENTITY
    Urban · Isabella
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  • PreciousDane
    PreciousDane2yr
    Posted

    First, I want to commend how the author chose to make the synopsis short, yet catchy. Second, the narration is quite short, but I know the author will improve overtime.

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    The Missing Secret Princess
    Urban · ValencianaYsabela
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  • PreciousDane
    PreciousDane2yr
    Posted

    The words are easy to read and therefore understandable. The story works well with the narration. One thing is that I am not quite sure if I did analyze the character designing clearly, but anyway the story is good.

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    A Midnight Partition
    Urban · Zara
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  • PreciousDane
    PreciousDane2yr
    Posted

    Hello, the way the story starts is indeed unique. The asking of brains and you is catchy. Although, I do not as to the manner must be written in pure narration or what, but either way, the most important thing is that it catches the reader's attention.

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    Love Complex: CXJYZ
    Teen · abbot1988
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  • PreciousDane
    PreciousDane2yr
    Posted

    Good choice of words. The first 3 chapters of the story caught my interest to read more about this novel. Imma going to add this one in my library.

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    Family Secrets
    Urban · Jae
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  • PreciousDane
    PreciousDane2yr
    Posted

    Your concept is interesting. The mage idea is pretty captivating that you wanted to read more of the story. Please see my message in discord. Thank you so much, author.

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    The Heiress Mage
    Fantasy · WolfyHime_Writes
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  • PreciousDane
    PreciousDane3yr
    Posted

    Oh... this mineral resource sounds really interesting. The synopsis' information about this mineral made it looked lacking,, which captivated the readers to find out more about the story. <3

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    THE CONSPIRACY OF THE ELITES.
    Sci-fi · Great
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  • PreciousDane
    PreciousDane3yr
    Posted

    To be honest, although the synopsis sounds a but cliché, I am still intrigue that the author might have a boom twisted part in the long run. This fact makes the story more exciting of what might happen along the way.

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    Privacy Boundaries
    Urban · Nhelle Joy Dan
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  • PreciousDane
    PreciousDane3yr
    Posted

    The synopsis is perfect. It is short but it can catch a reader's attention. It does not need to be a dialogue or wat, just putting the readers on a mood to keep reading. <3

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    When the Worlds Collide 1
    Fantasy · chuuuya
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  • PreciousDane
    PreciousDane3yr
    Posted

    Readers will surely love your story. It has good pacing about the sequencing of events and the "scenarios" are not hurtful to read if you know what I mean. <3

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    Soulbound
    LGBT+ · Scarletheart84
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  • PreciousDane
    PreciousDane3yr
    Posted

    After reading this, "RSK, a History student from India- suddenly gets transmigrated to 13th century Jin Dynasty, China." I was awake and wanted to read more because it sounds like the story has an interesting plot and turn twists of events.

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    Lost in the 1st Millenium AD
    Fantasy · Ritankar_Sarkar_
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  • PreciousDane
    PreciousDane3yr
    Posted

    The author seemed to bring a new narration style for the readers. Because as I read the story, it is like a diary of one's life. You are like reading a true story and it feels interesting.

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    Dargolth Kaiser and The Djiins
    Fantasy · RichanRyunathal
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