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It's a face slapping novel, don't read expecting something else. That being said, it's a good novel. Mc is a four times reincarnator, smart and powerful. His system is justified and his reincarnation too. There is no unnecessary mystery and mc isn't a beta. Good novel, only thing I didn't like is the updating speed
Just going with the flow. After reading so many chapters I think author doesn't really know how to develop the novel. I don't think it's bad but it's not as good as the start. The plot repeats like 50 times and there are many incongruences. Even though it's not as good as the start, it's good to read if you have nothing else to read
This is losing potential. The mystery is being forced at this point. Kitten said "I am your father" but doesn't even try to explain the situation, how does he hope that Leo believes him? Leo should have already figured out some things but somehow he didn't. There is nothing that I hate more than forced plot and forcefully making a MC ignorant and dumb when everything happening is obvious af
I mean, he didn't defend his work so you don't know if he would say the author is making excuses or not, the author did something so you wouldn't know what he would do if the author did nothing and he is not saying he is arrogant because the author is not making excuses, he is saying the author is arrogant because he is using irony and sarcasm to answer a critical comment, not evaluating the problems named by the OP nor trying to correct the problems he said so he did nothing but talk shit and pretend he is right lmao. But I understand you defend the author since he is your friend, but his attitude is certainly ridiculous, I don't know how good is the novel he wrote.
Please stop the fillers. You literally used a entire chapter to repeat the same sentence over and over again. The only thing we saw in this chapter was him handing over a black token and the guards letting him pass because of that. It's not worth paying for this kind of chapter
It makes no sense. Wouldn't his father and the hero be suspicious of him with all this planning? It is out of character for him to be so considerate of his family and to know so intrinsically the workings of politics. Also, he shouldn't believe that he is going to die so why would he send a letter to his father hinting at him knowing he would die? He said the original owner of the body would happily die without even knowing he was being killed so he was someone ignorant, arrogant and inconsiderate as it was shown before. This letters are out of character with his original self and the hero should be suspicious
Lmao, you guys are crazy. What do you all mean by "desire"? If I want a ruthless mc it's not because I want to be a killer irl myself, it is just more enjoyable to read that way. If I want a true/chaotic neutral character it's not that i am willing to kill people if it benefits me or that I will ignore someone that I can save if it doesn't. You have a twisted way of perceiving novels and that is worrying taking into account that you are a reader of I will kill the author, where the mc is literally a walking delusional psychopath with little to no remorse. That being said, I dont think that harem would go well with this novel if it was not planned from the start as the other guy said
I can't edit but I forgot to mention that it has nothing to do with being a god of crime. If you want to read about killing, conspiration, smart mc misleading others, climbing in society, tricking others, stealing and that kind of stuff then this is not your novel. As I said before, MC is not a villain nor is he neutral evil.