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hmmm, writing is good although you cannot immerse your self to it imagening it is possible, character design good for not i dont know in the upcoming updates if there is.... updating stability can be said okay not slow and fast while world backround since its walking dead then may be it good since the movie is good, all i can say that author dont put too puch explanation about his abilities in chapter if it is long you can consider filling a non chapter explaining its abilities and what it do.
Im a man, now im questioning my sexuality or maybe discovered my fetish.....anyway the writing is good for a novel like this the character is kinda good, while the authors update is quick, how the plot goes is good the world backround is unique and somewhat expected, while the mc character is kindgood but i suggest make him a dignified degenerate king his a king after all , make him domineering king, on other hand how he talks to other character is sometimes cringy, overall good.
it's so cringey i guess... who would've gave their blood casually and teach someone casually, being kind is good but being too kind is kinda simp for the girl like the japanesse eroge novels and manga at for the rest of all he dont have the senior aura, lets say its shin's character as phoenix to be kind and gentle , but he can be gentlw and kind but wuth vigillance and carefullness before giving the blood he could've ask her question if shes worthy when theres thousand of people too who cant get pregnant....
author if i dont know of its your preference but as far as i know erza is not a kind of woman who thirst for men her character as a strong woman is her most highlight in anime i wish you dont make it the opposite well so far so good buy what erza i see in this chapter gives me a strong contradictio.