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Only Yang, the youngest among them, however, displayed a keen interest in Luo Yin's explanation, his light-aquamarine eyes gleaming with curiosity.- Dao_Ancestor_8mthReplied to JinchusageCh 16 Warfare Is More Complex
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Haha, some would surely know.
The Devas collected the sage's bones, and the Supreme Being crafted the weapon which would about an end for the Great Evil's atrocities from them. - Dao_Ancestor_9mthReplied to Lucky_duck
How did this one feel?That's something i think I'll change a little, outcome will remain the same though.
"Admiral Zhang, if my memory serves me right. You have a young daughter, don't you?" Luo Yin said as a grin adorned his countenance. - Dao_Ancestor_9mthReplied to Lucky_duck
🤣🤣
Luo Yin then continued, "An unprecedented operation can't have a track record. Its record will begin with the coming battle, will it not?" - Dao_Ancestor_9mthReplied to Lucky_duck
Lol😂😂
"This one's not just incompetent, he's an imbecile," Luo Yin concluded in his thoughts. "Just as it has always been, the world won't change. I will change it." - Dao_Ancestor_9mthReplied to Lucky_duck
Hehe there's not many woman in the Military😂
A restoration bath was an exquisite marvel, a vast basin crafted from the rare and precious Vitality Wood, brimming with Medicinal Liquid to a depth of thirty centimeters. - Dao_Ancestor_9mthReplied to MorningWolf
Well, yeah. But I still need to make some stuff clear before continuing that as such I'm Editting right now. Once it is done, this would look better.
"We have awaited your arrival," she intoned with unwavering devotion, her voice carrying a solemn conviction. "The hour has come for your blade of justice to descend upon this world, reshaping its very fabric into a new era of purity and righteousness." - Dao_Ancestor_9mthReplied to OriginalDream
Well, yeah.
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I see. Good to know that you liked it.
In the Infinite Planes of Existence. Several Beings came to fame while several fell to obscurity, several Beings ascended the throne while several got banished. - Dao_Ancestor_9mthReplied to Anakin_Lost
Well, that was all I could do to just somehow give a quick look at the world.
In the Infinite Planes of Existence. Several Beings came to fame while several fell to obscurity, several Beings ascended the throne while several got banished. - Dao_Ancestor_11mthReplied to 7rox
Okay I'll go through it and get back to you.
"Secondly, when it comes to moving from one area to the next, our force, which is located in the center, is able to take a shorter route than any of them. In order for them to move to another Area without fighting us, they will have to make a wide detour. This makes both time and distance our allies." - Dao_Ancestor_11mthReplied to 7rox
That would make a whole lot to edit. I suppose I'll try to do that but I'm not sure if I can pull it off for now.
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Very well.
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That is right. To some extent, I had made a group of characters with their own ideologies to lead the story but realizing that I couldn't go far with it, I changed the story. In fact, I'm still making variations to make it better.
Any other Questions? - Dao_Ancestor_11mthReplied to yellowjacket65
Pretty much, yeah😆
Luo Yin's nostrils detected the faint tang of an almost imperceptible odor, one that soldiers in the Warships were familiar with. - Dao_Ancestor_11mthReplied to Venerable_One
Well, I'll be working on the realms later on. This isn't the main thing right now after all.
Greater Circle (Peak).