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I applaud to your writing sir ;3
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Beta-Reader here! First off, theres's no Netorare in the story!!!! But there is a lot of Netori where the MC steals girls (including but not limited to mothers, mother in laws, sister in laws, etc etc.) from others!!!! And it's extremely spicy in that department I must say~~ Well, I'll be straight to the point. This novel is really promising if you are looking for an R18 novel with a lot of interesting and arousing situations. The main reason I would recommend someone to read it would be its plot that not just follows on R18 scenes but also focuses a lot on interesting flirting and comedy. I think they are the bread and butter for this novel. When the characters start their flirting, it just becomes so much more good! And the MC is actually quite good in terms of comedy as well. As the title says, he's the Love Saint. so he naturally knows how to conquer woman in the most ways possible ( not se**al manner but rather through flirting and stuff) Well, the arousal which it provides is also extremely good but I just happen to prefer the romance/ flirting and It also has quite a bit drama in it, which fits in well to create an even more interesting atmosphere in the story (for people who find it better to fap with story definitely need to read this one!)
This book has been deleted. - Dao_Ancestor_9mthReplied to Kais_Imperium
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Only Yang, the youngest among them, however, displayed a keen interest in Luo Yin's explanation, his light-aquamarine eyes gleaming with curiosity. - Dao_Ancestor_9mthReplied to JinchusageCh 16 Warfare Is More Complex
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Haha, some would surely know.
The Devas collected the sage's bones, and the Supreme Being crafted the weapon which would about an end for the Great Evil's atrocities from them. - Dao_Ancestor_10mthReplied to Lucky_duck
How did this one feel?That's something i think I'll change a little, outcome will remain the same though.
"Admiral Zhang, if my memory serves me right. You have a young daughter, don't you?" Luo Yin said as a grin adorned his countenance. - Dao_Ancestor_10mthReplied to Lucky_duck
🤣🤣
Luo Yin then continued, "An unprecedented operation can't have a track record. Its record will begin with the coming battle, will it not?" - Dao_Ancestor_10mthReplied to Lucky_duck
Lol😂😂
"This one's not just incompetent, he's an imbecile," Luo Yin concluded in his thoughts. "Just as it has always been, the world won't change. I will change it." - Dao_Ancestor_10mthReplied to Lucky_duck
Hehe there's not many woman in the Military😂
A restoration bath was an exquisite marvel, a vast basin crafted from the rare and precious Vitality Wood, brimming with Medicinal Liquid to a depth of thirty centimeters. - Dao_Ancestor_10mthReplied to MorningWolf
Well, yeah. But I still need to make some stuff clear before continuing that as such I'm Editting right now. Once it is done, this would look better.
"We have awaited your arrival," she intoned with unwavering devotion, her voice carrying a solemn conviction. "The hour has come for your blade of justice to descend upon this world, reshaping its very fabric into a new era of purity and righteousness." - Dao_Ancestor_10mthReplied to Lore_God
Well, yeah.
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I see. Good to know that you liked it.
In the Infinite Planes of Existence. Several Beings came to fame while several fell to obscurity, several Beings ascended the throne while several got banished. - Dao_Ancestor_10mthReplied to Anakin_Lost
Well, that was all I could do to just somehow give a quick look at the world.
In the Infinite Planes of Existence. Several Beings came to fame while several fell to obscurity, several Beings ascended the throne while several got banished. - Dao_Ancestor_1yrReplied to 7rox
Okay I'll go through it and get back to you.
"Secondly, when it comes to moving from one area to the next, our force, which is located in the center, is able to take a shorter route than any of them. In order for them to move to another Area without fighting us, they will have to make a wide detour. This makes both time and distance our allies." - Dao_Ancestor_1yrReplied to 7rox
That would make a whole lot to edit. I suppose I'll try to do that but I'm not sure if I can pull it off for now.
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Very well.
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