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VisualKoFey

VisualKoFey

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I'm creating a world where my story and maybe others take place. Summoned and Unwanted might span up to 2000+ chapters before it ends with 8 to 9 seasons. I hope the fans like the story.

2019-09-14 JoinedMalta
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  • VisualKoFey
    VisualKoFey2yr
    Replied to AbysallNight

    I'm sorry but I went the slow way and he has changed after the current events up until the last chapter I released today. I tried to make it to be a bit relistic but it ended up being a little bit drawn out.

    Ch 3 Know the truth
    Summoned and Unwanted
    Fantasy · VisualKoFey
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  • VisualKoFey
    VisualKoFey2yr
    Replied to DaoistorA7EW

    Thank you. I appreciate your help. I fixed the error, and I don't have an editor. I use Grammarly for spelling mistakes and stuff like that. It didn't show as an error, so I thought it was fine. English isn't my primary language.

    This paragraph has been deleted.
    Summoned and Unwanted
    Fantasy · VisualKoFey
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  • VisualKoFey
    VisualKoFey2yr
    Replied to 6_Void_King_9

    I made the MC as a growth-type character with two powers. A mysterious hero power and a boost-type mutation power. The more he experiences and connections he makes, the stronger he becomes.

    Ch 17 Beast vs Monster. One predator can live.
    Summoned and Unwanted
    Fantasy · VisualKoFey
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  • VisualKoFey
    VisualKoFey2yr
    Replied to Viduus

    You are correct, but I am showing the story of the MC in the new world and not if or went he goes back to Earth with the book now working differently after Kevin, the writer of the book dies. The MC might appearance a change in the time difference in both worlds. I hope this can help you understand from my perspective of the storytelling.

    Ch 4 Lost and Found
    Summoned and Unwanted
    Fantasy · VisualKoFey
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  • VisualKoFey
    VisualKoFey2yr
    Posted

    I read eight chapters but I can say that this is a great story of witches showing the past to the next generation witch to take revenge for them. However, they forget that the MC isn't a tool, but a living being. The story has a great potential, keep it up.

    LOVE; A CURSE OR BLESSING
    Teen · Debbiejay
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  • VisualKoFey
    VisualKoFey2yr
    Replied to Sagely_pervert

    Oh he will.

    Ch 20 The three share their past
    Summoned and Unwanted
    Fantasy · VisualKoFey
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  • VisualKoFey
    VisualKoFey2yr
    Replied to ItBeLikeThat

    All he knows is that he should be able to transfer back after a hundred years and that the book doesn't say what happens after that. But he is forgetting how the book is also working differently as well since he was summoned earlier than those before him.

    Vincent closed his eyes and wished for all days to be filled without worry and enjoy his hundred years in this world with Ester, Lupa, and Kazumi.
    Summoned and Unwanted
    Fantasy · VisualKoFey
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  • VisualKoFey
    VisualKoFey2yr
    Posted

    The story has a good start with all the details needed to help the reader understand what is happening and what her personality is like. The writing is good, well placed, and easy to read. I recommend anyone stumbling on this story to give it a go.

    Princess of the Silver Ocean
    Fantasy · Ice_Princesss
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  • VisualKoFey
    VisualKoFey2yr
    Posted

    I read a few chapters and I say it has a good start. The two characters have a good synergy yet they feel far and different enough to learn something from each other. I recommend this and hope the best it can evolve into a fantastic story. Keep it up.

    Summoning a Wicked Wizard
    Fantasy · uhjuihoijio
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  • VisualKoFey
    VisualKoFey2yr
    Posted

    A good start so far. I hope the story can focus more on what the MC is doing as it can help readers understand better what is happening around the MC, but other than that, the story makes you want to know what is going to happen next. Overall, I recommend anyone finding this story to take their time and give this story a go.

    Transmigrated into a Novel: Payne Gale, The Villain's Spouse
    Fantasy · authortinnnnn
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  • VisualKoFey
    VisualKoFey2yr
    Replied to ItBeLikeThat

    The mark that can't be removed the one of the ways for him to get discovered.

    "Ok, ok, I will talk. But first promise me that you will sit down and lower your knife. Then I will answer all your questions." Vincent looked at Ester, mustered what little courage this rejection built up.
    Summoned and Unwanted
    Fantasy · VisualKoFey
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  • VisualKoFey
    VisualKoFey2yr
    Replied to ItBeLikeThat

    Yes, he starts as a naive person until he understands he needs to change.

    To him, Ester didn't appear the type to trick others since she kept her emotions on her sleeve. They were too real to be called an act, and she felt like a naive girl as well.
    Summoned and Unwanted
    Fantasy · VisualKoFey
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  • VisualKoFey
    VisualKoFey2yr
    Replied to ItBeLikeThat

    That is the MC Vincent's assumption. 100 years and return back to Earth. But as the book mentions nothing after it happens, he can only hope.

    Ch 3 Know the truth
    Summoned and Unwanted
    Fantasy · VisualKoFey
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  • VisualKoFey
    VisualKoFey2yr
    Replied to Little_Foxxy

    Thank you.

    Summoned and Unwanted
    Fantasy · VisualKoFey
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  • VisualKoFey
    VisualKoFey2yr
    Posted

    I hope readers of this story enjoy the journey as I do while constantly evolving the story based on the character's personalities. Something about this story. Harem tag is more like teammates rather than the eye candy type, and this tag will make sense later in the story. Romance tag is to show the interaction with the characters rather than "Hi." and "You're in." If you have any questions that aren't considered spoilers, I will try to answer them. Thank you, and have a great day.

    Summoned and Unwanted
    Fantasy · VisualKoFey
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  • VisualKoFey
    VisualKoFey2yr
    Replied to Ricko_wijaya

    No, the boar's leg is injured. That's why to use all its strength to remove its tusk from the tree it has to use its injured leg with the pain it brings along.

    The boar squealed while it furiously shook its head. It tried to unstuck its tusk while immeasurable pain shot from its leg. The boar did its best while contorting its face in pain and anger.
    Summoned and Unwanted
    Fantasy · VisualKoFey
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  • VisualKoFey
    VisualKoFey2yr
    Replied to NaTaS_2951

    Yes. At the start, I left everything as healthy but now will start addressing them differently. I'm thinking of leaving it like this to let his ability be as basic as possible for now.

    [Condition] Healthy
    Summoned and Unwanted
    Fantasy · VisualKoFey
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  • VisualKoFey
    VisualKoFey2yr
    Replied to Sagely_pervert

    Soon.

    *[Inspection level too low.]
    Summoned and Unwanted
    Fantasy · VisualKoFey
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  • VisualKoFey
    VisualKoFey3yr
    Replied to skizrim_3

    Thanks :)

    Ch 113 Lurking danger
    Summoned and Unwanted
    Fantasy · VisualKoFey
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  • VisualKoFey
    VisualKoFey3yr
    Replied to magapi

    Thank you. I understand but it has a slow start while getting to know the characters and their growth.

    Ch 96 The power to swallow the world
    Summoned and Unwanted
    Fantasy · VisualKoFey
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